[WEEK 4]Axeshun 0-0 vs Czar Chasm 0-0

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Old 05-11-2008, 10:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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[WEEK 4]Axeshun 0-0 vs Czar Chasm 0-0



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Old 05-12-2008, 12:01 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 05-13-2008, 05:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 05-15-2008, 10:07 PM   #4 (permalink)
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We all know Czar came here to try & get some exposure
But the bottom line is, your pathetic attempt at a closer
Its already over, the truth is you thought you could shine
When harry potter compliments your skills on riding the pine
So keep the small talk for yourself, cuz I aint tryna hear it
u couldn't get a laugh in between ur lines, if u had lil wayne's lyrics
Don't kid yourself about a win this week, dude ya drops garbage
I could throw my heat seekers at you, but they'd all be off target
See its like your girl having sex with u, when you flow & spit
When know it'll take long to get hard, so we hype u up to get it over with
You're not on my level dude, tryna make new names cool again?
Wanted to make a statement his first week, turns out his verse is full of em
If you tryna ask what I got in store for you, thats just retarded
Cuz I got a mini fridge with roses; to go with your department



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Old 05-15-2008, 11:38 PM   #5 (permalink)
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seriously, you should be deletin ya rap
cuz there's very little chance that Ima leave it intact
there's not enough room for both of us, the RBL's a packed house
I'll have this bitch blacklisted so in two ways I'll take the Axe out
there aint no beef, son, I swallow it whole
catchin the biggest of losses wit the smallest of flows
thinkin u bringin some shit, u barely a challenger
I'll bust holes thru ya lines like I was playin Galaga
you should back out now and save yourself the bummer
wit me the odds are against you like even prime numbers
u tryna hit the top, u thinkin the time's right
when really you'd need the Sword of Omens to see the limelight
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Old 05-17-2008, 01:16 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Axeshun,

We all know Czar came here to try & get some exposure
But the bottom line is, your pathetic attempt at a closer
(sorta of a weak opener)
Its already over, the truth is you thought you could shine
When harry potter compliments your skills on riding the pine
(different.........I wasnt really feelin it tho)
So keep the small talk for yourself, cuz I aint tryna hear it
u couldn't get a laugh in between ur lines, if u had lil wayne's lyrics
(eh, it was aight)
Don't kid yourself about a win this week, dude ya drops garbage
I could throw my heat seekers at you, but they'd all be off target
(I liked it, it took me a sec to get it, but it was clever)
See its like your girl having sex with u, when you flow & spit
When know it'll take long to get hard, so we hype u up to get it over with
(I liked it, coulda been worded better...........I think you meant **We know**)
You're not on my level dude, tryna make new names cool again?
Wanted to make a statement his first week, turns out his verse is full of em
(haha, good ish)
If you tryna ask what I got in store for you, thats just retarded
Cuz I got a mini fridge with roses; to go with your department
(eh, pretty weak for a closer)

Czar,

seriously, you should be deletin ya rap
cuz there's very little chance that Ima leave it intact
(Not bad....kinda weak for an opener tho)
there's not enough room for both of us, the RBL's a packed house
I'll have this bitch blacklisted so in two ways I'll take the Axe out
(good name play)
there aint no beef, son, I swallow it whole
catchin the biggest of losses wit the smallest of flows
(weak hit)
thinkin u bringin some shit, u barely a challenger
I'll bust holes thru ya lines like I was playin Galaga
(It was aight.....I dont think everyone knows who Galaga is, but I do....It was an aight punch)
you should back out now and save yourself the bummer
wit me the odds are against you like even prime numbers
(weak set up.....but i like the execution)
u tryna hit the top, u thinkin the time's right
when really you'd need the Sword of Omens to see the limelight
(eh, weak closer)

This battle wasnt terrible but it wasnt great IMO. It was just aight. Czar I think you need to put just as much time into thinkin out your set up as much as your execution. I think Axeshun had the better punches here. Not a bad battle you guys, one

VOTE = AXESHUN
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Vote-Axeshun

This wasnt close in my opinion.. Czar just didnt have much substance in his verse.. I wasnt feeling it that much.. Neither had any eye opening lines but Axe did enough to win...

When harry potter compliments your skills on riding the pine

that was the best line in the battle...
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Old 05-17-2008, 05:10 PM   #9 (permalink)
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axeshun best line:Its already over, the truth is you thought you could shine
When harry potter compliments your skills on riding the pine

czar best line:u tryna hit the top, u thinkin the time's right
when really you'd need the Sword of Omens to see the limelight

i'll give to axe shun
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Axeshun

We all know Czar came here to try & get some exposure
But the bottom line is, your pathetic attempt at a closer

Its already over, the truth is you thought you could shine
When harry potter compliments your skills on riding the pine

Don't kid yourself about a win this week, dude ya drops garbage
I could throw my heat seekers at you, but they'd all be off target

Czar

thinkin u bringin some shit, u barely a challenger
I'll bust holes thru ya lines like I was playin Galaga


Vote: Axe... better overall verse, with better concepts, and more substance. Czar u didn't seem to really give much of an effort, as your verse wasn't very hard hitting imo.
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Old 05-18-2008, 06:52 PM   #12 (permalink)
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my vote goes to axe for having a bit more effort that other dude didnt look like he cud be arsed there was no punches an it lacked humour while axe put alot more effort in an takes this imo..

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