[WEEK 4]Prodigal_Son 2-1 vs dizthachozen1 1-1

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Old 05-11-2008, 10:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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[WEEK 4]Prodigal_Son 2-1 vs dizthachozen1 1-1



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Old 05-12-2008, 01:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i'm in...i'll prolly post up sometime today, son.
not really sure how many lines i'ma drop.
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Mic check 1,2 what is this?

Prod. Son back to business.

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Old 05-14-2008, 05:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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stay off my cock, dog...i'm rock hard and you cotton soft/
i spit heat like volcanic hot sauce while you convert-2-bull...like ya top's off/
like mike when he came back...45 is my calibur/
my punches are howitzers...you always been a coward, huh? /
you ain't gotta say shit, save that lame scrpit for gay subplots/
i'm menacin'...you venison and this is where the buck stops/
ya punches are BB's n' buckshot...a written example of exactly what not/
to do when you were conceived...on the sheet you shoulda been a cum spot/
ya raps are half-ass like part time plumbers/
in the end you'll find you can't beat me like fatigued drummers/
due to my orchestration, you'll bow out like *pizzicato*/
earlier i called you a cum spot...then i remembered ya mom swallows/
you gettin carved up like a pumpkin for testin my integrity/
best believe i'll have you feelin a candle's burnin where ya chest should be/
even in tha sig you just a middle man in the corporation...insignificant/
while my mind's diligence is magificent...your spits are indigent/
broke with no assets...oh, you're back...shit i'm bored/
you just foul...no basket...needin to practice galore/
you're hardly prodigal...more like a steppin stone than an obstacle/
i punch hard on targets, so ya eye'll squint like ya wearin a monocle/
ya raps are soft as a marshmallow...while I-Roc like a 'Z'/
my 4 x 4's are fantastic...go head n gear-up...you won't be landing-a-thing/
i'm spittin more than sixteen...quadratic equations n such/
algebraics i display quick...sideways-8 him for lunch/
infinitly rippin this weak mc efficiently is my affinity/
my vernacular propagates spectacular rhyme ability/
after this verbal battering...you'll have lost your alkalinity/
i've ripped you a new ass-hole...now your gay lover can take it's virginity/
lyrically ya not in my league let alone my vicinity/
by definition ya just a consumer...no matter what you pretend-to-be/
i've always been A-plus...you get burnt like C's plus D's/
after losing, you'll point out scape-goats like G.O.P's/
my expertise as a blessed mc perplexes he who questions me/
i'll string you out like extra cheeze...my punches hittin nothin but this net, see(netcee)/



*pizzicato is plucking the strings, not using the bow*
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Old 05-14-2008, 07:39 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Always look for a double meaning in my bars. Remember that.

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Who's goin win this battle? I don't know but I'm the best
So my guess, his record goin be 1-2 like a mic check
I'm blastin on this nigga, leave em fuller than a throttle get
But it's ironic cuz all my bullets is hollow tips
His verse had no highlight, forgot to drag he's left click
And I'm with the right click so I'm sorry but he can't copy this
Corporation bitch, my crew raw and you already know
Put black holes through his white-T's -- dominoes
My skillz can grow, but I'm RM's finest, ain't it showin?
Chozen needs to gets ta goin, this Nimrod's lamer than D. Omen
In beef, he'd prolly sing like a choir, he ain't hard
So I'm bout to kill this chorus, cuz I already beat HooKnBarZ
I'm the favorite in this battle, so of course I'm gettin kinda cocky
Plus he had no hard punches, while my verse is pretty rocky
He thinkin his bars hard, it's cute though, he's tryna be me
But you can't say diz dude ain't gay the way he's steady tryna beat me
Bitin niggaz like Beavers, he's more full of more shit than Eddie Hascal
*Flex my grip and twist him Empty, nickname em Diz-E Rascal
My bars is bullets, so he can't take these shots for very long
My verse leave em more fucked up than Lil' Wayne on every song
If I sawem in the streets at night, best to bet we would fight
Hit em wit a good right, and knock em out like Suge Knight
Homo nigga, more ass creampie's is what he wants cooked up
And his mouth gets viewed by more members than Audio Emcee Hookups
I should make a thread and ask if you're ill, just to put you to shame
Cuz in reply's you'd see "..." dot's like Rev••••'s name
I'm a student of the game, and to class you are a no show
So my verses A-B range, you in the D-C's like GoGo
I don't know, why you in this race, bitch, you ain't winnin
At this point you just hard-headed, nickname you Mrs. Clinton
By now, diz bein ahead in this battle is kinda shifty
Cuz I'm leanin on this cat, call me 59-Fifty
diz may dizrespect some, but he gotsta gimme mine
Cuz in my verse all he see is hard bars like **Remy Ma


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both of the raps are sort of making me wonder why they even bothered to match you both up, you both seem like you wrote the same rap, as if you calab'ed on this shit or something. I'm only seeing the same old hallow tips lines from Prod, He needs to come with something different, It seems to be the same old same old.

Diz didn't come really hard or anything. I felt that he did better than Prod. I'm sure that a lot of people are gonna disagree with me, but that is just how I feel, and his framework was there also.

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Yo, did I really spit that hollow tips line before?

I ain't even realized dat shit lol. I like, zoned out writing this. My bad.

>_>

But WTF? I spit 17 bars and dude says it's the same old same old cuz I accidentally recycled a line. Wow.
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Old 05-14-2008, 10:56 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I thought you brought your A game to this battle, flow was there, punches, name play and good word play. Prod wasnt bad or anything, but I thought your verse was kinda like "I'm the shit and your not"............good ish guys, I just thought dizchozen1's unique style prevailed in this battle. one
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Vote-Diz.

IMO Diz's verse was better this time around.. Neither verse really grabb'd my attention.. I felt like prod didnt have any kinda intensity in his verse.. Like he wrote it half asleep.. I've seen him write alot better.. Diz's style was aight.. i liked it.. coulda flipped some of his punches a lil better.. but it was enough..
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Oh, shoot. No, it's all the gangster stuff. That's what I meant about that. When I just got into it, it was mostly all the gangster stuff that you were spitting. I think that you need to just change it up that is all I meant by that. I'm not worried about the hollow tips. everyone does it by mistake...hell, who doesn't forget that a line has been used and then spits it?

I just want to see more inventive from you is all man.
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I gotta go wit chosen1 on this one.Both o' ya'll came from tha g-loc stand point an imo since diz writes tha same gangsta type shit ery week he had more practice an Prod couldn't beat dude at his own game.I ain' really a fan o' tha whole blast ya CAP ya type verses unless cats is mad nice wit 'em cuz they don' translate well ta text but this week diz made tha shit work.His punches were far more creative an ••••• flipped than Prods.Although Prod had some witty lines, ••••• wordin' an' more of 'em mighta got ya my vote.Diz was jus' more consistent throughout.

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Yeah, nothing really grabbed my attention much in this battle........verses were aiight but really nothing special to quote........pretty close match though but I would give it to Diz for the simple fact he was more witty with his punches though they weren't hard hitting, he got the edge over you

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Old 05-17-2008, 10:27 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Both had solid verses but Diz seemed to hit harder and had some really original concepts. This was actually a good battle to look over though. Props to both
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stay off my cock, dog...i'm rock hard and you cotton soft/
i spit heat like volcanic hot sauce while you convert-2-bull...like ya top's off/
eh. ok.

you ain't gotta say shit, save that lame scrpit for gay subplots/
i'm menacin'...you venison and this is where the buck stops/
played, but aite.

you're hardly prodigal...more like a steppin stone than an obstacle/
i punch hard on targets, so ya eye'll squint like ya wearin a monocle/
eh, aite.



I didn't find too much in the verse I liked... I think u started off stronger than you finished, and I feel a lot of the vocab may add to your flow in your mind, but takes a lot away from the effectiveness of your lines. Very wordy...

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Who's goin win this battle? I don't know but I'm the best
So my guess, his record goin be 1-2 like a mic check
aite

His verse had no highlight, forgot to drag he's left click
And I'm with the right click so I'm sorry but he can't copy this
okay concept. wording could've made it better...

My bars is bullets, so he can't take these shots for very long
My verse leave em more fucked up than Lil' Wayne on every song
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Homo nigga, more ass creampie's is what he wants cooked up
And his mouth gets viewed by more members than Audio Emcee Hookups
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I should make a thread and ask if you're ill, just to put you to shame
Cuz in reply's you'd see "..." dot's like Rev••••'s name
aite.

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