[WK 1] Demik v. TorrMup

Quriosity · 04-20-2008, 06:43 PM

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Doc Richards · 04-21-2008, 06:37 PM

welcome to the rbl...

12 lines

TorrMup · 04-21-2008, 09:13 PM

checkin in, I'll drop some bars later. one

TorrMup · 04-21-2008, 10:19 PM

Great, I have to battle someone with kindergarden raps
and what the fuck is Demik??? Shit sounds dumb retarded n’ wack
You cant spit nigga, so you must have cotton mouth
and I come wit punches nigga that will leave you lost in doubt
So before you talk about, how I aint in yo class
just know I graduated, and will smoke you like my hash
so sorry im not sincere n’ my flows are severe
but what can I say…….. I don’t like homo’s, fags and queers
I know my punches hurt you, but homie don’t let it
cuz not everyone can be like me………..straight up poetic
you need to get schooled so let me give you a lesson
to emcee, or not to emcee……….that is the question
and you still don’t get that huh? Its cuz ya ass is stupid
Dog, you gotta be the sorriest person on rapmusic
but my flows are abusive, like an angry boyfriend
and I beat bitches like you for my own enjoyment
and Im ready for deployment, If you wanna got to war
But you don’t want none of Torr, cuz Ill make you my whore
so don’t get to spittin, your weak shit that is written
cuz this battle is already over by a unanimous decision

TorrMup · 04-21-2008, 11:23 PM

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TorrMup · 04-22-2008, 07:25 PM

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TorrMup · 04-22-2008, 09:03 PM

[WK 1] MADD ILL v. MetaSin
[WK 1] Chin Kwon v. toil
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post15605135
[WK 1] 2Shay v. Yung Troy
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post15605177

Doc Richards · 04-22-2008, 09:15 PM

why in the world are you so anxious to lose?

bet i aint lyin when i said he's done
how the FUCK do you go 8 lines over and skip the punch in every one?!?
Torr has no surprises, this junky should stop with the head games
only thing up your sleeve is needle marks and dead veins
looks kill, and you're dead, so face the truth, relearn the basics dude
& leave your kids a good will, to shop at the same place as you
this week examinate your skills, you might as well just flee the test
this g is wrecked, those beads of sweat big enough to give your BFF
us dope heads lose & sign out, but now this league aint reeking of balance
so us matching up? is just Q's way of keeping his talent....
next time we face, MISMATCH should be put in bold...
you should know...
my punch'll put a crook in ya neck, that alkatrazz couldnt hold...

VeNTiCaL · 04-22-2008, 09:29 PM

i mean really.....

Doc i at lease kept readin an shit was nice......

'Torr has no surprises, this junky should stop with the head games
only thing up your sleeve is needle marks and dead veins'....i dig

Torr i just kept lookin for sumthin to give u a chance...i never found it
no disrespect...reality

vote-doc

toil · 04-23-2008, 12:09 AM

Torrup - you used a reasonable rhyme scheme so I expected more from your punches. The flow was spot in, in general, but none of the lines were actually punches, you just chatted about how youd win or w/e. Only line close to a punch was:

"and you still don’t get that huh? Its cuz ya ass is stupid
Dog, you gotta be the sorriest person on rapmusic"

but you really need to use some form of similies or something to make a diss actually hit hard.

Doc Richards - lmao at the opener, summed this up pretty well. Up your sleeve concep was cool too. I liked the closer, I flipped a 'crook in ya neck' line once awhile back..I much prefer your wording of it though. Nice.

Overall: Doc Richards took this because he dissed/clowned on the other guy. TorrMup looks like he has potential. just needs to get to grips with the dissing side.

Vote - Doc Richards

Big Mack · 04-23-2008, 04:01 AM

Break down

-Torr

So before you talk about, how I aint in yo class
just know I graduated, and will smoke you like my hash
---very nice punch
you need to get schooled so let me give you a lesson
to emcee, or not to emcee……….that is the question
---Yeah, I liked that line. It was NICE.

Doc

---WHOLE Verse Fire! damn that was some striaght up murder.

Vote=Doc

Chin Kwon · 04-23-2008, 02:07 PM

Vote=Demik

lol, Tor u have that newbie syndrome of ranting. don't fret cause i did the same thing on my verse this week. I'm not sure why we do that but, yea, i agree with others in that u really didn't have any solid lines; Most of which were u talking about urself. Willie drop hard from the opening bell and just ran with it...never lookin back. Sharp, precise and powerful....yeah, Demik got this. Peace

-Kwon

xX_NASTY_Xx · 04-23-2008, 02:15 PM

torr.... too many unnecessary posts in this thread.... keep it to a minimum.... this is ur warning

have a nice day

Prodigal_Son · 04-23-2008, 06:26 PM

No contest.

Torr, first rule of the RBL, punchlines and personals are everything. You had like neither. Stick around though my dude, with practice you'll prllly be ill.

Demik, yo, I ain't even gotta tell you. Dope shit as usual.

/Demik GMV

Calibre · 04-23-2008, 07:15 PM

Ok, Im not gonna lie, Demik was Sick. Stunning verse, nice bit of charisma, nice flows lead up to the punch nice, best read so far. Nothing to really critic this verse on. Well done

TorrMup, It seemed you really had no punch in ur verse. I was expecting a punch but never really got to much, your flow needs improvement and so does ur bars. It was on the verge of pigeon shit and ant diarreah I couldnt make it out though.

you need improvement

v/demik

TorrMup · 04-23-2008, 08:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xX_NASTY_Xx

torr.... too many unnecessary posts in this thread.... keep it to a minimum.... this is ur warning

have a nice day

yeah, sorry about that. I read the rules after I made some posts... but I edited them afterwards with "---------------"

2Shay · 04-23-2008, 08:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doc Richards

Torr has no surprises, this junky should stop with the head games
only thing up your sleeve is needle marks and dead veins

line of the battle imo.

doc just seemed more experienced,
stayed to the point n kept jabbin away.

torr seemed like a wild verse hoping to hit with a lucky punch.

vote - doc

04-20-2008, 06:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
Quriosity Michael Clayton of Text Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Atlanta, Ga Posts: 19,026	[WK 1] Demik v. TorrMup ----- The RBL Official Rules & Regulations ----- "GENERAL RULES" VERSUS DUE: Every Thursday @ 11:59 PM EST LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 12 lines, Maximum of 64 NO BITING/RECYCLING, NO EXCEPTIONS • Biters will be banned from participation within the RBL • Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent • Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent • If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours • CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required • A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default • If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 4 lines (4-15) AND 3 voting links in order to claim victory • A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!! • If an opponent fails to show in a Championship match, the remaining participant will be ranked as the number 1 seed, but will not be considered a Champion until a win by vote • Upon your second no show, you will be suspended for two weeks of competition. A third no show will result in a three week suspension and a fourth will result in a suspension for the remainder of the season. There is no suspension for first time no showers. • A verse can be edited if and only if it is the first verse to be posted and the other verse has yet to be posted or it is the second verse posted and a vote has yet to be received. • Competitors are limited to posting 3 times in their own match, which allows for checking in, posting votes, and posting a verse. For each post over 3, unless deemed necessary by the moderators, the competitor will be docked 1 vote. • Each competitor may only post once in another competitors battle allowing for a vote and nothing more, if you would like an explanation or to explain as to why a vote was cast a certain way, you can p/m them or point things out properly in the vote to begin with. Violating this will result in losing a vote in your match. • Members found constantly disruptive to the league will have their sign-ins ignored. "VOTING RULES" VOTES DUE: Every Sunday @ 11:59 PM EST • You MUST vote on AT LEAST 5 matches AND post links in your thread • EACH link NOT POSTED will result in a 1 vote DEDUCTION • Voting on the Championship and Contender matches is mandatory • Your votes MUST be AT LEAST 2 FULL lines in length per verse in order to be deemed valid • If your opponent fails to show, you are still accountable for voting on AT LEAST 3 matches as well as posting those links in your match!!! • Votes posted AFTER DEADLINE will NOT COUNT!!! • Voting is open to PARTICIPANTS, RBL MODERATORS, and PAST CHAMPIONS ONLY!!! • PAST CHAMPIONS MUST vote on a MINIMUM of 3 matches in order to be counted as a legitimate voter • Editing your vote for any reason must be done within the hour of the original post time. Otherwise, the vote will be null and void. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and cleared by a moderator *MODERATORS ARE LAW OF THE LAND* __________________ .textmastersoftheuniverse. calefaction lucifa thereturn alias2 magus quriosity speedycalhoun johndough bonniebathory metasin sephiroth ((JOIN THE RBL NOW)) ►► CLICK ME, CLICK ME ◄◄ Last edited by Quriosity; 04-20-2008 at 06:56 PM.

04-21-2008, 10:19 PM	#4 (permalink)
TorrMup Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Wherever I lay my head Posts: 1,509	Great, I have to battle someone with kindergarden raps and what the fuck is Demik??? Shit sounds dumb retarded n’ wack You cant spit nigga, so you must have cotton mouth and I come wit punches nigga that will leave you lost in doubt So before you talk about, how I aint in yo class just know I graduated, and will smoke you like my hash so sorry im not sincere n’ my flows are severe but what can I say…….. I don’t like homo’s, fags and queers I know my punches hurt you, but homie don’t let it cuz not everyone can be like me………..straight up poetic you need to get schooled so let me give you a lesson to emcee, or not to emcee……….that is the question and you still don’t get that huh? Its cuz ya ass is stupid Dog, you gotta be the sorriest person on rapmusic but my flows are abusive, like an angry boyfriend and I beat bitches like you for my own enjoyment and Im ready for deployment, If you wanna got to war But you don’t want none of Torr, cuz Ill make you my whore so don’t get to spittin, your weak shit that is written cuz this battle is already over by a unanimous decision Last edited by TorrMup; 04-21-2008 at 11:21 PM.

04-21-2008, 11:23 PM	#5 (permalink)
TorrMup Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Wherever I lay my head Posts: 1,509	------------- Last edited by TorrMup; 04-22-2008 at 08:33 PM.

04-22-2008, 07:25 PM	#6 (permalink)
TorrMup Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Wherever I lay my head Posts: 1,509	-------- Last edited by TorrMup; 04-22-2008 at 08:33 PM.

04-22-2008, 09:29 PM	#9 (permalink)
VeNTiCaL fucks ya problem... Join Date: Mar 2001 Posts: 552	i mean really..... Doc i at lease kept readin an shit was nice...... 'Torr has no surprises, this junky should stop with the head games only thing up your sleeve is needle marks and dead veins'....i dig Torr i just kept lookin for sumthin to give u a chance...i never found it no disrespect...reality vote-doc __________________ M.I.C VeNTiCaL.Meticulous.Henry Wads.Lewie Smalls.The SyN.Rip Valentine fucks ya problem

04-21-2008, 06:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
Doc Richards 5x RBL Champion Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Voted 2004's Best New Battler Posts: 1,636	welcome to the rbl... 12 lines

04-21-2008, 09:13 PM	#3 (permalink)
TorrMup Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Wherever I lay my head Posts: 1,509	checkin in, I'll drop some bars later. one

04-22-2008, 09:03 PM	#7 (permalink)
TorrMup Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Wherever I lay my head Posts: 1,509	[WK 1] MADD ILL v. MetaSin [WK 1] Chin Kwon v. toil http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post15605135 [WK 1] 2Shay v. Yung Troy http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post15605177

04-22-2008, 09:15 PM	#8 (permalink)
Doc Richards 5x RBL Champion Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Voted 2004's Best New Battler Posts: 1,636	why in the world are you so anxious to lose? bet i aint lyin when i said he's done how the FUCK do you go 8 lines over and skip the punch in every one?!? Torr has no surprises, this junky should stop with the head games only thing up your sleeve is needle marks and dead veins looks kill, and you're dead, so face the truth, relearn the basics dude & leave your kids a good will, to shop at the same place as you this week examinate your skills, you might as well just flee the test this g is wrecked, those beads of sweat big enough to give your BFF us dope heads lose & sign out, but now this league aint reeking of balance so us matching up? is just Q's way of keeping his talent.... next time we face, MISMATCH should be put in bold... you should know... my punch'll put a crook in ya neck, that alkatrazz couldnt hold...

04-23-2008, 12:09 AM	#10 (permalink)
toil Registered User Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 308	Torrup - you used a reasonable rhyme scheme so I expected more from your punches. The flow was spot in, in general, but none of the lines were actually punches, you just chatted about how youd win or w/e. Only line close to a punch was: "and you still don’t get that huh? Its cuz ya ass is stupid Dog, you gotta be the sorriest person on rapmusic" but you really need to use some form of similies or something to make a diss actually hit hard. Doc Richards - lmao at the opener, summed this up pretty well. Up your sleeve concep was cool too. I liked the closer, I flipped a 'crook in ya neck' line once awhile back..I much prefer your wording of it though. Nice. Overall: Doc Richards took this because he dissed/clowned on the other guy. TorrMup looks like he has potential. just needs to get to grips with the dissing side. Vote - Doc Richards __________________ we could play mercy, but if you accepted that id make you say oww before me like a dyslexic cat

04-23-2008, 02:07 PM	#12 (permalink)
Chin Kwon The Angkorian Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 635	Vote=Demik lol, Tor u have that newbie syndrome of ranting. don't fret cause i did the same thing on my verse this week. I'm not sure why we do that but, yea, i agree with others in that u really didn't have any solid lines; Most of which were u talking about urself. Willie drop hard from the opening bell and just ran with it...never lookin back. Sharp, precise and powerful....yeah, Demik got this. Peace -Kwon

04-23-2008, 06:26 PM	#14 (permalink)
Prodigal_Son FlObama Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Duckin 5-0 and my Moms... Posts: 1,289	No contest. Torr, first rule of the RBL, punchlines and personals are everything. You had like neither. Stick around though my dude, with practice you'll prllly be ill. Demik, yo, I ain't even gotta tell you. Dope shit as usual. /Demik GMV __________________ Sig 8 lines maximum including spaces. It wasn't even that long bitch.

04-23-2008, 07:15 PM	#15 (permalink)
Calibre Oneduh Killa Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: London, UK Posts: 4,894	Ok, Im not gonna lie, Demik was Sick. Stunning verse, nice bit of charisma, nice flows lead up to the punch nice, best read so far. Nothing to really critic this verse on. Well done TorrMup, It seemed you really had no punch in ur verse. I was expecting a punch but never really got to much, your flow needs improvement and so does ur bars. It was on the verge of pigeon shit and ant diarreah I couldnt make it out though. you need improvement v/demik __________________ The Peoples Champ aka Oneduh Killa! ya dun know.

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