AUSCHWITZ: 1. John Hensley vs. 8. MC4SIGHT

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[MC4SiGHT]

checking in.

[john hensley]

cool, 14-16 lines?

[MC4SiGHT]

yeah thats cool with me

[john hensley]

Carvin ya up kid, my knives'll even hurt ya pride.
And i'll be tearin' off 4's skin... regardless of if you're circumsized.
Next is gasoline n' matches, and i know ur scareda the shit.
English class is outta the question... but i'm still leavin this American Lit.
It's playground rules and i'm about to look at this cats fate.
Bitch.. my swings'll send ya flyin.. WITHOUT a push from a classmate.
I disproved a theory witcha bitch, n' i'd like you to know.
They say it can't strike twice..
... but last night i hit it lightning fast.. about 200 times in a row.
^Your sex life is like a vacation. that's somethin i had to say.
Cuz the last time a bitch went Sight seeing.. she just vomited and ran away.
Ya broke n' retarded, an' i just can't stop at that.
I gotta kick this around..
.. cuz ya IQ n' credit score combined look like the score of a soccer match.
Puberty to him's like the 07 countdown, plus i'm a threat to stop.
But once you get to 4.. it's a situation where the ball is still yet to drop.
1 vs. 8 seed? sorry man, i hate to say it butcha ain't the victor.
Lookin for an upset?.. shit, peep ya moms reaction to your first baby picture.

[MC4SiGHT]

this dudes funny, yea i'll admit that
but in this battle my shits jpeg, hensley's a bitmap
and in re-cap, i'll fuckin disperse of this bitch
cause i got an itch, that in this match i'll be scratchin u
ya momma laid an egg, but there's no hatchin u
straight bashin you, and i dont need a fuckin bat
cuz i'm straight son on johnny boy, like a baseball cap
here's the gap,
this fag couldnt latch a win if his verse was all "hooks"
i hate novels, but after your shit, i rather love books
so gather your composure,
i leave hensley fuckin negative, like his last kodak exposure
im dozing, shits got me sleepin
i leave you dead swimmin, like toddlers in the deep end
fuck john, nah fuck his mom i got tangled in her vaginal secretion

LOL

[headless verseman]

Your sex life is like a vacation. that's somethin i had to say.
Cuz the last time a bitch went Sight seeing.. she just vomited and ran away.

hahah

Ya broke n' retarded, an' i just can't stop at that.
I gotta kick this around..
.. cuz ya IQ n' credit score combined look like the score of a soccer match.

oh boy thats stretched...even conceptually, haha...NO

1 vs. 8 seed? sorry man, i hate to say it butcha ain't the victor.
Lookin for an upset?.. shit, peep ya moms reaction to your first baby picture.

hahahah

circum line was cool...solid first round verse, enough quotes to get you through while dropping fairly consistent



4sight, i would say no offense, but there isnt an easy way to say it, im not the type to just say, "average verse, blah blah, " to pray you dont hate vote me, i respect your rstl skill alot....but this verse was trash....for somebody who is so good at topicals, you didnt even correctly end rhyme in MULTIPLE spots, and the concepts werent hard hitting at all...for example, and this is to learn from


and in re-cap, i'll fuckin disperse of this bitch
cause i got an itch, that in this match i'll be scratchin u
ya momma laid an egg, but there's no hatchin u

what the hell was this? first, the rhyme pattern of scratching u, and hatchin u...is way elementary...but that concept is just a no....lol

bitmap line was creative, but then again not so hard hitting...


here's the gap,
this fag couldnt latch a win if his verse was all "hooks"
i hate novels, but after your shit, i rather love books
so gather your composure,
i leave hensley fuckin negative, like his last kodak exposure

again, this section has multiple faults....negative/exposure lines are played...really played, and this was done in the most basic of fashion..no real wordplay to go with it....." hooks", not needed..people follow kid....


Vote Hens.....sight gave it a good try, but he should keep to topicals

[MC4SiGHT]

hahaha yeah i know it was shit
i had a shitty ass week
i'll sign into the RBL soon and u can see me actuallytry
instead of write something in 30seconds

[ExodusIII]

yeah...i'ma have to go for john here too... 4sight's verse didn't really have a quotable...nothing really stood out...hens had a coup[le nice lines in there...nothing spectacular but did more than enough to win this...

vote=john hensley

[DaTrusHurtz]

Carvin ya up kid, my knives'll even hurt ya pride.
And i'll be tearin' off 4's skin... regardless of if you're circumsized.
I disproved a theory witcha bitch, n' i'd like you to know.
They say it can't strike twice..
... but last night i hit it lightning fast.. about 200 times in a row.
^Your sex life is like a vacation. that's somethin i had to say.
Cuz the last time a bitch went Sight seeing.. she just vomited and ran away.

vs.

Nothing

Damn, how did this kid get in this tourney? Nothing even close to a quotable. 4skin line was hilarious, pretty easy win for Hensley right here.

Vote - Hensley

[Camarac]

Rofl at the foreskin line, the rest was pretty played or had little impact from hens, but he had already done enough to win here. 4Sight pout up NO challenge at all to be honest man, haha, even the bitmap line headless quoted was wack IMO. Roflmazo at that verse. Terrible.

Thank fuck he got taklen out in round one.

Vote - J. Hens

[Plumber]

VOTE - HENSLEY

That ''sigt seeing'' line had me on the floor dying lolll

Good battle, MC4Sight is sick at topicals BTW

[wilmer deryou]

john hensley

Next is gasoline n' matches, and i know ur scareda the shit.
English class is outta the question... but i'm still leavin this American Lit.

^Your sex life is like a vacation. that's somethin i had to say.
Cuz the last time a bitch went Sight seeing.. she just vomited and ran away.

1 vs. 8 seed? sorry man, i hate to say it butcha ain't the victor.
Lookin for an upset?.. shit, peep ya moms reaction to your first baby picture.

vs

mc4sight



so gather your composure,
i leave hensley fuckin negative, like his last kodak exposure
im dozing, shits got me sleepin


ya hens killed that sight seeing line was dopeeee....easy pick here...this wasn't close

vote-hens

[-Troublesome-]

Hens:
Carvin ya up kid, my knives'll even hurt ya pride.
And i'll be tearin' off 4's skin... regardless of if you're circumsized.

haha

It's playground rules and i'm about to look at this cats fate.
Bitch.. my swings'll send ya flyin.. WITHOUT a push from a classmate.

nice

^Your sex life is like a vacation. that's somethin i had to say.
Cuz the last time a bitch went Sight seeing.. she just vomited and ran away.

lmao, line of the battle

1 vs. 8 seed? sorry man, i hate to say it butcha ain't the victor.
Lookin for an upset?.. shit, peep ya moms reaction to your first baby picture.

lol, nice

overall nice verse...had other good lines as well, pretty consistent


4SiGHT:

Nothing really quotable in that verse, you need a lot of work. But you're a nice topical head, so i'm sure if you just keep battling you'll get better by the verse, just think way outside the box, some witty shit.

Pretty one-sided here, hens got it easily

vote = John Hensley

[kungfugrip]

It's playground rules and i'm about to look at this cats fate.
Bitch.. my swings'll send ya flyin.. WITHOUT a push from a classmate.
I disproved a theory witcha bitch, n' i'd like you to know.
They say it can't strike twice..
... but last night i hit it lightning fast.. about 200 times in a row.
1 vs. 8 seed? sorry man, i hate to say it butcha ain't the victor.
Lookin for an upset?.. shit, peep ya moms reaction to your first baby picture.

Uhh.. I'm gonna have to call this a blowout... I wasn't feeling anything
from 4sights verse.. sorry b

v/ Hensley

[x - calibur]

john hensley had a cool drop. coulda come harder on some of those disses, shit like the iq score doesnt have the same bite..
but overall it was good. lol @ circumcision and english lit lines, and news years ball drop

u held it down


4sight man it looks like u really didnt put that much effort in//// i can tell you can put it down put u kinda threw that together, nothing that really hit hard


vote====hensley

[Joey donuts]

Vote: john hensley

Lol dope stuff from hens. Was real consistant and hard hitting.
I personally like the english lit line.
4sight didn't come with anything i liked. Felt real missing, could of had some decent lines at least.

[Richard Corey]

John Hensley
I disproved a theory witcha bitch, n' i'd like you to know.
They say it can't strike twice..
... but last night i hit it lightning fast.. about 200 times in a row.
^Your sex life is like a vacation. that's somethin i had to say.
Cuz the last time a bitch went Sight seeing.. she just vomited and ran away.
Ya broke n' retarded, an' i just can't stop at that.
I gotta kick this around..
.. cuz ya IQ n' credit score combined look like the score of a soccer match.

MC4SIGHT


....uuuuh...


Overall:
....uhhhh...


vote:
...john


(sorry 4Sight...but damn, man.)