AUSCHWITZ: 3. Defcon_5 vs. 6. J-Nyce

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[Defcon_5]

in goin 20 faggot

SAIGON: 2. Meta Syn vs. 7. Eternalpath
WACO: 4. Joey donuts vs. 5. DaTrusHurtz
WACO: 3. headless verseman vs. 6. Worse Enemy
SAIGON: 4. -Troublesome- vs. 5. TypeRight
AUSCHWITZ: 2. Phryme vs. 7. ExodusIII

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

checkin in

dont play off my verse, wack dude

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

Listen son, you running out of all ya time that was left,
And we all like hearing, so why would anyone try to be Def?
Lighten ya step! I'mma shoot u until that AK jam....
Cuz I'm already knowing Def is more shook than spray paint cans!
Now I'm ending this, it's over once I riddle ya dome,
So any curtain call u have, u just won't pick up the phone!
No bowing, no applause, nobody's feeling ya verse....
But yo, first - how the fuck u going ta fit in the hearse?
Defcon is fat as fuck, how could he tame this great?
I took a Pik-a-chu...... and dog, I think u gained some weight!
Look at Ash, even Pokemon done changed his fate...
And I would Rai-chu, but even as him your a fuckin disgrace!
Snuff in his face! Handling guns is something u ain't venture,
The only ''buck shots'' u seen, was some Ohio State pictures!
First round, u gettin' tarred 'n feathered, put ya bars together...
Get u put in a ''forecast'' that looks worse than March's weather!
Real talk, listen geek - nobody feels what u sayin....
When u rock Arenas, U get more Zero's than when Gilbert is playin!
You's a actor, ain't no one hoping that this guy's not killed,
Plus ya record see more Els than Ernie's highlight films!
So use any tact and die, my fists will make u patch ya eye..
If ya last battles were Fantastic 4's?,
..U need some fucking Jackson 5's!
Only way u passing by, is if I kept fuckin' ya sister!
Askin who's better? U'll just get no Answer like the Sixers!
Cuz it's obvious I'm better, and honestly u got no luck
And fuck 20 - in this club, it's either 21 or up!

[Defcon_5]

i'ma tell u like this

ur not a thug just a wanksta with clever boasts
so ya life's my RBL record since u change it in every post
ur a bay area loser fam..watch how i prove it man
when people say "GO STUPID" they ain't tellin u to dance
u should pop some E, find a girl..u just might beat it
then be Easy..or atleast die of aids just liek he did
i'm bringin the truth that'll leave this fake faggot exposed
so it's only fittin ur in AUSCHWITZ since u stay downin a Pole
this is another $150 u want..but i doubt that ur earnin
we're in the GERMAN division..i'ma Blitzkreg that ass outa the tourny
ur bout to be crucified..u ain't matchin this chump
don't just need faith..u need the whole •••ish community backin u up
i'ma knock u out n that's my word..they won't see u winnin this
you'll see this promise land that would probably make the Hebrews envy it
won't just ground u in this..i'm movin the earth now
how could i PLAYOFF ya verse when ur losing the first round?
u talk like ur good but u ain't showin the people..
..how u got RC revved up then he ran over ya ego
Def'll football tackle ya girl..put a lump on her shit
i'ma Raider then hand that pussy back when i'm done with the bitch
u not at my level..i'm not lyin ya worst chump
if people consider u nice J..then i'ma reverse dunk
let's keep it movin and link this beatdown on with sports
block u away from the net to make sure u never rebound on the boards

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

votes

[headless verseman]

Originally Posted by Defcon_5

i'ma tell u like this

ur not a thug just a wanksta with clever boasts
so ya life's my RBL record since u change it in every post

lol

ur a bay area loser fam..watch how i prove it man
when people say "GO STUPID" they ain't tellin u to dance

haha

u should pop some E, find a girl..u just might beat it
then be Easy..or atleast die of aids just liek he did

ehhh

i'm bringin the truth that'll leave this fake faggot exposed
so it's only fittin ur in AUSCHWITZ since u stay downin a Pole

ehhhhh again, concept is there, but its stretched a tad

this is another $150 u want..but i doubt that ur earnin
we're in the GERMAN division..i'ma Blitzkreg that ass outa the tourny

haha, aight...better

ur bout to be crucified..u ain't matchin this chump
don't just need faith..u need the whole •••ish community backin u up

nah

i'ma knock u out n that's my word..they won't see u winnin this
you'll see this promise land that would probably make the Hebrews envy it

ive seen that before

won't just ground u in this..i'm movin the earth now
how could i PLAYOFF ya verse when ur losing the first round?

okay concept

u talk like ur good but u ain't showin the people..
..how u got RC revved up then he ran over ya ego

finally, a true personal *compared to everybody's new semi personal commentary joints


Def'll football tackle ya girl..put a lump on her shit
i'ma Raider then hand that pussy back when i'm done with the bitch

lol

u not at my level..i'm not lyin ya worst chump
if people consider u nice J..then i'ma reverse dunk

haha, dope

let's keep it movin and link this beatdown on with sports
block u away from the net to make sure u never rebound on the boards

nice closer....although it was hit or miss, it was relatively fresh..i think you re used that promise land concept recently...or i just saw it somewhere else...but its played either way...good round 1

Listen son, you running out of all ya time that was left,
And we all like hearing, so why would anyone try to be Def?

good opener

Lighten ya step! I'mma shoot u until that AK jam....
Cuz I'm already knowing Def is more shook than spray paint cans!

nah

Now I'm ending this, it's over once I riddle ya dome,
So any curtain call u have, u just won't pick up the phone!

ehh, concept doesnt really hit as a punch

No bowing, no applause, nobody's feeling ya verse....
But yo, first - how the fuck u going ta fit in the hearse?
Defcon is fat as fuck, how could he tame this great?
I took a Pik-a-chu...... and dog, I think u gained some weight!

last line def works audio, is stretched for text....i still liked it

Look at Ash, even Pokemon done changed his fate...
And I would Rai-chu, but even as him your a fuckin disgrace!
Snuff in his face! Handling guns is something u ain't venture,
The only ''buck shots'' u seen, was some Ohio State pictures!
First round, u gettin' tarred 'n feathered, put ya bars together...
Get u put in a ''forecast'' that looks worse than March's weather!
Real talk, listen geek - nobody feels what u sayin....
When u rock Arenas, U get more Zero's than when Gilbert is playin!
You's a actor, ain't no one hoping that this guy's not killed,
Plus ya record see more Els than Ernie's highlight films!


not feeling any of that

So use any tact and die, my fists will make u patch ya eye..
If ya last battles were Fantastic 4's?,
..U need some fucking Jackson 5's!

shoulda said J 5's...so it references u...dunno if youre named jackson, if so dope line

Only way u passing by, is if I kept fuckin' ya sister!
Askin who's better? U'll just get no Answer like the Sixers!

answer lines man...cmon..you know they played

Cuz it's obvious I'm better, and honestly u got no luck
And fuck 20 - in this club, it's either 21 or up!

not a punch



Vote Defcon.....J had some nice lines that are commercial mixtape accessible, but they arent punchlines....defcon had some nice concepts and was way more consistent


nyce, i know i keep saying this...but what you lack in text you make up for in rhyme ability...stick to that shit man

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

^ just stay out my battles, u seem kinda biased im starting to notice

0-1 tho

[ExodusIII]

i gotta go for def in this too...j had a decent verse...but def matched that and had a few lines that were just a little bit fresher than j's

vote=def

[DaTrusHurtz]

Defcon is fat as fuck, how could he tame this great?
I took a Pik-a-chu...... and dog, I think u gained some weight!
Snuff in his face! Handling guns is something u ain't venture,
The only ''buck shots'' u seen, was some Ohio State pictures!
You's a actor, ain't no one hoping that this guy's not killed,
Plus ya record see more Els than Ernie's highlight films!
So use any tact and die, my fists will make u patch ya eye..
If ya last battles were Fantastic 4's?,
..U need some fucking Jackson 5's!

vs.

ur not a thug just a wanksta with clever boasts
so ya life's my RBL record since u change it in every post
i'm bringin the truth that'll leave this fake faggot exposed
so it's only fittin ur in AUSCHWITZ since u stay downin a Pole
ur bout to be crucified..u ain't matchin this chump
don't just need faith..u need the whole •••ish community backin u up
i'ma knock u out n that's my word..they won't see u winnin this
you'll see this promise land that would probably make the Hebrews envy it
u talk like ur good but u ain't showin the people..
..how u got RC revved up then he ran over ya ego

J-Nyce, u had a few played things like the AI line, but as a whole ur verse was decent, wasn't sure what to expect from u cuz i ain't seen u before. Only thing that hindered u was u had the concepts, but ur execution was a bit off in some of them. Even the lines I quoted, tho good, could have been better with different usage. I woulda quoted the Def line cuz I ain't seen it and it was cool, but chances are its played on Defcon cuz he been around for so long I'm sure people have done similar nameplays on him. Good verse tho.

Defcon, also a pretty good verse. The Auschwitz shit was just wrong man, good thing there aren't a lot, if any •••s around here lol, but it did hit pretty hard. The other •••ish jokes were funny too and the strong part of ur verse. A few played ideas also like the raider and playoff lines, but not too much of that from you. Opener had a nice "fuck you swagger" to it to open the battle so I liked that. A pretty solid verse as well.

Well, I got this in quotables 10-8, decent battle here, but Defcon had more quotables and I felt his quotables were stronger anyway.

Vote - Defcon

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

that answer line is not played cuz A.I just left the the sixers

u dudes don't even understand it

it's 0-2, that 11 post dude cant vote

[-Caliban-]

vote - j

close battle

and that answer line is played man regardless

But i just feel Def had a lot of filler than was unnneeded, not enough knockout lines

Real talk, listen geek - nobody feels what u sayin....
When u rock Arenas, U get more Zero's than when Gilbert is playin!

That went over a lot of ya'll heads, easily the line of the battle

GILBERT Arenas. He goes by Agent Zero

i got it perfectly, Dunno about the other voters, but yea

Def had a coo couple of lines too, such as that AUSCHWITZ/like a pole line, pretty nice

but i think J got it

[DaTrusHurtz]

lol how could i not understand such a simple punch. Answer lines are played, don't matter that he just left the sixers, concept is still played unless u flip it real originally... which u didn't.

anyway, my vote counts. For 1 i'm in this tourney and have to vote. For 2, just cuz u don't know who i am don't mean i'm new, i'm not from this site dumbass.

BTW, LOL at dude below saying "Dunno why I got lnked to this on AIM, but......"

and LOL at u gettin' 3 votes from 3 people not in this tourney within 17 minutes. Shitt I hope Oneduh DQ's you

[Robby Digital]

I can see where guys think J lost, and I don't know either one of you - but is really came down to me breaking down the lines.

And being a basketball fan, that Gilbert line is clear as fuck now, which makes it sick as fuck because of how original it is.

It was that line and Ernie's highlight films line that got it for me

Def had the •••ish line, and the R.C revved up ya ego line that i really felt hit.

What it came down to was flow and who I felt had the better structured battle verse,

Vote - JNyce

and i can vote i believe, look at my post count.

[Plumber]

Vote - Defcon

[Defcon_5]

lmao@this..J stay out the battle until it's over..don't need u commentating on every vote that comes my way..and i'm sure one will allow datrushurt's vote..it's not like trus is a newbie...but since u wanna comment on votes..lmao@all 3 of ya votes coming from people that nobody has ever seen..except maybe u down in the gallery or something..i mean forreal link me to at least 3 battles those people had..i can show u where the people who voted for me are actually active with text battles...go aim some more and stop replyin in here

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

Originally Posted by Defcon_5

lmao@this..J stay out the battle until it's over..don't need u commentating on every vote that comes my way..and i'm sure one will allow datrushurt's vote..it's not like trus is a newbie...but since u wanna comment on votes..lmao@all 3 of ya votes coming from people that nobody has ever seen..except maybe u down in the gallery or something..i mean forreal link me to at least 3 battles those people had..i can show u where the people who voted for me are actually active with text battles...go aim some more and stop replyin in here

stfu

i just peeped datrusthurtz is in the tourney u faggot