13. –Prospect- 5-1 Vs 14. Anaphora 8-3

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Old 04-12-2004, 08:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 04-13-2004, 02:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 04-15-2004, 05:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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#8, The illegal alien topic.

Manuel Lovario scans the barrio with experience and, well, sorrow
The squalor's all over, and locals import the trash by the carload
Dust permeates the very gates to their makeshift home of twenty years
Sheet metal and some rivets, you'll find no water running here
A three legged dog hobbled by with a slight whimper for each steppin
Sadly, Manny shakes his head and thinks back to the winter of 47
Looking about the squalor he called their home he was fed up
Hearing of the riches in the north, he decided to just head up
Got to Tijuana to be stopped at the border by white men with guns
He left them spun at a run, got 5 miles before he was stopped by the sun
Near dehydration Manny lie prostrate and started prayin'.
It wasn't the Messiah that would ride up to finally save him
But the US border patrol, who sorta control the area rolled up
Manuel saw it as his savior, in a big white and gold truck
But before he knows what's happening, he's handcuffed
And stuffed in the back, taken back to the Mexicans rough
Life, farming a dustpan, it's a tough land to eke a living off of
Less than a year later he lost his whole crop to dust
And off of that land he again ventured, though this time literally
Sick of the endentured life, he tried again to escape, this time its by sea
Built out of old tires and palletes, you could hardly call it a boat
But it did the one thing Manny needed, it stayed afloat
At least in the calm water, but this ocean wouldn't stay pacific
a timid seaman, Manny got seasick, and couldn't hang with it
Over fifteen years he tried crossing ten times, always failing.
Returning to the poverty and dust was always dismaying.

Manuel is shaken from memories as a truck comes to a halt
His son steps out and crumbles in a chair in front of their house
"You're still putting in overtime I see" Manny says quietly
"Work is work." he replies then sits beside Manny silently
And he too gazes about the state they were still living in
"This is better you know." The son said "This is different."
"I tried for more than a decade to make it here." Manny replied
"And each time I was roundly, and soundly denied
Now, looking about this place you've managed to get us
So long after I decided to give up, and still we live thus."
The son looked back at Manny and knew what he was saying
"It's a different land father, though it seems the same."
"Work is work, but son, you must understand, that home is home
And I am not there now, But I will be soon, even if I go alone."

Manuel Lovario, scanned the Barrio with experience, and well sorrow
And left El Centro, and arrived home with no plans for tomorrow,
But he smiled at the dust bowl, because he was once again at home.
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Old 04-15-2004, 10:15 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Oh, and Prospect, that quote is actually Bobby Kennedy... the late great RFK... though I think it is actually originally a biblical quote, Abraham I believe... but a good one.
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Ya.. probably, but its also been quoted by AZ in Aziatic.
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2. Write an epic tale about you being a condom.-Stature

Whats my role and purpose, when im misused im worthless
In any tight situation i usually break the surface
Im takin on journeys.. spring break or any vacation
By men of many races.. spread out across the nation
Im the only safe way.. the perfect escape route
I save lives like super heroes.. especially below the blouse
I can exploit pleasure.. for both the male and female
You can have sex with any chick.. without knowin any details
About her life.. so think about it.. and give me a try
But let me tell you about a man who forgot me one time

This guy looked past me and then saw his life change rapidly
To actually.. see the rest of his life not end happily

You shouldve strapped me on.. i was in your back pocket
But you rushed the girl.. you shouldve had a talk quick
At least for a little bit.. then you couldve got down to business
You couldve fucked her safely with a secure and fun ambition
But now shes pregnant.. you sixteen.. you still live with ya parents
How you expect to raise a kid when your still considered an adolescent
You shouldve thought first.. i could of prevented everything before it got worse
and shot sperm wouldve been caught by me instead of ya partner
Now she due in 9 months.. im glad that that one night was fun
You wish you used me.. when you thought that one night i was dumb
You gotta alter moves.. stop smoking weed and eating shrooms
Its not cool.. you gotta raise a kid while you in high school
So no regrets.. no rewind.. ya cant change whats happened kid
Shit.. its your fault.. you shoudve practiced abstinence

This young girl was always pressured.. and one day she couldnt do it
So she gave into a man whose slept with more than a few women

Damn.. Why didnt you say NO?.. you know you had me just in case
Just because he said no.. doesnt you mean you throw me away
You shouldve went with your heart.. and used a firm voice instead of soft
The dude wasnt strong.. you couldve easily pushed him off
But i guess you wanted it.. thought the man was special and prominent
And you gave him dominance.. to crumble and break you like promises
You shouldve went home before he let you in.. and avoided the premises
And now your listenin.. as the doctors diagnose you with syphilis
You had sex only to have ya pussy burnin like alcohol on an open wound
Shoudve listened to all ya health teachers when they spoke to you

So see i can either benefit you.. or put all odds against you
Buts its the decision you get to.. that will most deeply effect you
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Prospect, incredible verse.

However, I just can't deny the emotions I felt from reading Anaphora's piece. I was so inspired, and the story could be related to any imigrant. The message of "home is home" was great, and how you lead the reader to that message was even more impressive. On any other day, Prospect would've won this battle. But it's too bad for him that Anaphora dropped such a powerfully emotional verse.

Great battle, guys.

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Both were very, very good verses. Prospect just hit it so well... I really felt the ending although it was simple. But it was good. Anaphora..nice job...so emotional, my family can relate to your piece..close battle both A gets it.

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breakdown for anaphora:

flow:good job in taking you on to the next line and through the whole verse good job 7/10

volcab:nice nothing huge but you didn't reapeat any words 7/10

story:no real twists but some good emotional meaning to it i liked it 8/10

overall:22/30

breakdown for prospect:

flow:good a little off in comparison to your openent though 6/10

volcab:nice use same as your oppenent nothing big but it wasn't basic either 7/10

story:great story i thought it had funny serious points and told a lesson bout safe sex good job 8/10

overall:21/30

vote--anaphora takes it by having a slightly better flow with his peice
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Old 04-17-2004, 03:32 AM   #12 (permalink)
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wow this was great let me break it down

anaphora

amazing the reference to home is home really fit the topic and if you were trying or not referenced on the pride a mexican has about his home and his work, they work hard to live a mediocre life, not all but a majority, your flow was good, some lines didn't rhyme, but you're internal rhyme scheme made up for that, very nice verse, emotional and structured well


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hmmm, i never peeped you before and must say i was very impressed you depicted the life of a condom and sort of created a man/womans conscience which coincided with the condom itself, very well detailed and a lot of meaning, everything from beginning to end fit together well and basically pre-warned these fickle teens out here in what could happen, good way to get a point across, nice flow, end rhyme off at times, but written very nicely, props



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good shit from both i was very pleased with this battle, it deserved a breakdown in which i gave unfortunately i have to pick just one, and at the end of my desicion i have to go with ANAPHORA, props to both though
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both had good verses,
Ana Nice verse, good image use, flow was good, I like how you worked with the topic.
I thought u had a good voice in this one.
Prospect, lol i liked the verse, image was very good in this one, lol it made me think about what could happen if i dont use one. Overall good verse.

IN this case it pretty much came down to the verse i was feeling the most, both came with good verses but i just was a little more taken by Anaphora verse
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Anaphora:

ah no..not that alien topic..i hate it..i hate all that fantastic shit..how can u rap about aliens? but u had pretty nice and vivid imagery..flow was good, vocab was also nice..story - eh for me..as i said i didn't like that alien topic..so i didn't like your story's content..but overall - nice drop..

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that's more likely..this condom topic always make me laugh..u done nicely..story was really appealin to me..flow was decent, vocab - ok, imagery - dope..and i loved your approach to the topic..this was nice..overall - cool..

it hard to decide but i didn't like Anaphora's verse (no offense)..

so vote - -Prospect-
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