eon- "In Dreams May Come"

[urboyeon]

Whats good RM, coming through to drop a little something off. drop those links and you already know i gotcha. shoooooot

SoundClick artist: urboyeon - We Get It In.

[Qwality]

startin out strong kinda got lost a bit in the verse nice flow n all just kinda average tho 2nd verse im diggin more the talkn in the middle was blah didnt like that im tryna at least vibe out to the track if its not knockin... needed a good hook to this

[meiosis]

nice voice, different. Agree with the above post talking isnt great man, kinda spoils the flow of the song. Second verse has better lyrics "we all bleed and we cry, share the same goals and reach for the sky" i liked that, could definitley listen to you but needs a hook or somethin other than the talkin.

Italix Lean Back Freestyle 2009

[DeMoNsToNgUe666]

im feeling this, dont mind the talking in the middle, feel like it connects the verses let cats into what u saying by slowing it down and talking to a nigga. feels like it went smoothly. lyrics are cool not mind blowing but dont need to be for this rack. good shit

[urboyeon]

thanks for coming through folks. yeah i was kinda expecting that some listeners wudnt really like the talking n all but i wanted to fit that in there so you can get a better understanding of my thoughts. im pretty sure i got at everyone who came through but if i missed you just lemme know.