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Old 10-12-2009, 02:11 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Four Joints - Link exchange
i dont care if you listen to one, or if you listen to all four, as much feedback as you give me i'll give you back, I promise. These are my first recordings in like 2 years - constructive criticism is more than well - its expected. Leave links i promise they'll get got.

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Operation Infinite Justice - Multis were SICK. Was the echo intentional? Idk, I think you should throw some dubs on it, because I can't hear what you're saying sometimes. Other than that, hot song.

Angels Don't Gangbang - I gotta say, I wasn't really feelin' your mic approach to this one. I see what you were gettin' at, but instead of a "?" type of delivery, I think it should've been more upfront, confrontational, not "fighting" but spiteful. Subject matter and lyrics were definitely good though, so word.

Convaluted Over - Your breath control wasn't really good on this one, so it kinda took a bit from your delivery, but like always, lyrics were thoughtful, and kept me locked in.

This Hotel Smells Funny - Beat is great, it really marry's your voice. This was probably the best, sonically.


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Old 10-13-2009, 10:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 10-14-2009, 10:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Listened to the first one all the way through n skimmed through the other 3. To me it sounds like you're writing the verses first n then trying to jam them on the beats your given. Listening through them it sounds like you have some good concepts and your multis are on point but the tracks are lacking rhythm and it makes it hard to listen to.

Simply writing to the beats and following the bar structure with ur lines would serve u incredibly well in making music in the future. Otherwise you should slow it down and record accapella and present it as spoken word. Especially with the message and the concepts ur trying to put across (ie. angels don't gangbang).
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Great music man. This first one is dope. FLow is dope as hell, beat is ridiculous. I love the effects on this too. I think mixing/mastering could've been at a higher scale. That's one thing I would definitely work on. But the rest of this is dope and I don't really have much to say. Great lyrics, flow, delivery.

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Whatup Pent, I just ran across this and in short I liked what your doing, I agree that you should try writing over the beat rather than fitting a written to a beat, I have had that same problem and its hard to have an non-forced flow. The lyrics are dope man, always thought you were a good writer but keep it up man. Reminded me of some of the early 2000's underground hip hop I really like. Yeah but to be honest the flow needs work, keep it up homie.
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i bumped convoluted all over
delivery is amateur, flow is amateur, sounds like ure reading, u sound really tense and uncomfortable behind the mic, lyrics are the highlight of this
beat is cool, i've heard better
ur breath control is limited
sounds like u have a lisp
sounds like ure still growing and u just gave birth to ur style not too long ago

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I checked out convoluted over.. ight

beat was cool.. I liked the loop.. sick sample

you was not bad.. the rhyme schemes was nice.. you got good multis, vocab.. voice was alright.. you kinda sound a lil flat.. your a bit to stiff to me.. you hit the snare alright.. you just need to get a lil more lose's all.. the lyrics are def there

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im listenin to angels dont gangbang. lolll dude im diggin this u remind me of sage francis but not annoyin. flow is very fluid man u sound natural on it

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overall: not bad.. i listened to angels dont gangbang.

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Guess you already know what I'd say. There is definitely potential there. I think these would all benefit from a lot more repetition. Like, record it, then re-record, till the words are just coming out of you rather than you working to get them out. That will eventually get you a much more comfortable/polished sound, which seems to be the biggest critique in this thread.

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The sound is good. really crisp. overall I liked the track. It reminds me of spoken word more than rap...and I dont mean that as any type of dis at all... I like that style.

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