Winds of War.. new shit that is much better than my last.. plz peep

IgloS · 09-22-2009, 08:55 PM

SoundClick artist: IgloS - This is just my page.. name is Iglos.. I Got Lots Of Skill.. I'm out here doin' my thing in central

Chimera · 09-22-2009, 11:34 PM

beats direct dope shit. The delievery is nice feelin this agressive shit. The lyrics is dope different shit here and there. the ruff voice cat is aiight too, the flows dope as fuck through the whole song son, im feelin this shit fa sho, winds of war underground hit.

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IgloS · 09-23-2009, 12:31 AM

fuck yeah.. good looks bro

Past-one · 09-23-2009, 03:09 AM

beats dope u should turn the vocals down a bit flow is cool not really diggin the hook to much verses were good tho

IgloS · 09-24-2009, 12:02 AM

thanks for the semi props..

wheres the fuckin love.. I peeped like 5 of yall with 'drop links' in ya threads.. and fuckin nothin'..

Stranger · 09-24-2009, 10:54 PM

beat is cool, need some help on mixin, vocals are too loud, flow needs some work too, but the lyrics are good. i like the second verse better, but still its too loud.... delivery could be better, not bad.

Sound Mechanic · 09-25-2009, 11:30 AM

This beat is fire...way you kats came on this was deff. on point...remind me of some Wu Tang shit...some fuckin Sunz Of Man type shit lol...some spots were shaky but overall you kats came with it on this proper...like stated i'd fix the mix on this...but shit overall sick shit. Check my beats out...i'ma have more Underground joints coming soon.

Audio Emcee · 09-25-2009, 11:54 AM

man dat shit is hot as hell dawg we should collab sumtim pz check the sig

Audio Emcee · 09-25-2009, 11:55 AM

but really thats shits on a nother level forreal

habeascorpus · 09-30-2009, 08:05 PM

intro is grimey...sounds like u like warcloud a little bit, just a little

rhymes are dope, flow is cool...maybe work on ur delivery...mixing skills could use some work, vocals are too loud maybe

sound like everlast on the hook with a rushed flow

i like ur rhyme scheme and the way u hit the beat...delivery could be stronger

this track was cool tho nice drop

Just Saying · 10-09-2009, 05:16 AM

my thoughts:

the beat:those samples are dope and the drumloop fits well with them.i would use this beat, and i would prolly even follow the same path content-wise too.

the hook:this guy sounds like a deepvoiced vinny paz without the anger.what he's saying does match the content of the verses and the flow is pretty clean, but he is completely emotionless..it sounds like he is just reading the page and doesnt give a fuck.

the verses:your delivery is reminiscent of three 6 mafia,you hit every kickdrum right on point,its sort of robotic.your content is kind of like 70's heavy metal content, they talked about dragons,swords,battle, and other midevil shit...you used the whole first verse as a sort of lead up to an attack that never gets sprung..its like chris farley yelling "excuse me! this will only take a second!" in that bank on the first floor of zalinskey's building in "tommy boy" or when he strapped road flares and a wrist watch to his chest...if your trying to be that rapper that no one should try to diss, use your lyrics..instead of filler..use a punchline..instead of a set up for a punchline..do another punchline...see any chino xl song for an example....your second verse sort of picks up the pace skill wise but the bite to your bark is still absent.

bottom line:work on being meaner,dont threaten to draw blood..fucking do it...also work on making your delivery more fluid and freeflowing you dont have to be a slave to the kick drum every time...oh and tell your boy to work on getting emotion across when he's recording his vocals..

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AlexKKKeller · 10-09-2009, 02:01 PM

Your vocab and overall choice of words is good, but your flow seems pretty "average." I'd say work on having a more confrontational delivery as well, especially for this type of song.

Keep it up, word.

The Doc · 10-09-2009, 08:41 PM

sound like some grave digger shit... i wish i had your vocals and I would mix your shit correctly just graduated from audio engineering school... dope none the less...

peep myines

times is hard tracked and engineered by myself

IgloS · 10-11-2009, 10:03 PM

thanks man.. yeah.. I get alot of people pickin up on my wu influences

Pent uP · 10-12-2009, 02:25 AM

dope that u used my name lol

IgloS · 10-19-2009, 10:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pent uP

dope that u used my name lol

don't flatter yourself.. lol.. that is funny tho.. glad you listened.. did you like it?

Pent uP · 10-19-2009, 10:38 PM

oh word, I thought it was pretty dope. SOrry for not dropping feedback down I think I was just in a rush. your delivery and flow is pretty on point, personable voice, beats legit, overall pretty cool track. If you want, and I'd appreciate, if u peeped out my shit too, its probably a couple of threads down

CoryPak · 10-20-2009, 03:59 AM

Production: you can do better. do you mix in headphones? u shud
Flow: ok.. can be polished
lyrics: ok.
Delievery: not great but not horrible

Overall: track is ok. put in that extra effort.. practice makes perfect bro.

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Devoid of Orbit · 10-20-2009, 01:25 PM

Yeah, this was pretty cool. The beat is dope in concept, sounds a little thin though. Like it could use some more mixing or something. I like your style. Sort of reminds me of some ol' Inspecktah Deck vibe. I really don't think you need all the adlibs doubling over your vocals. It's cool here and there, but you've got enough of a pressence where I'm not sure you really need to use that tactic as much as you do. Or at least maybe turn down the background track a little. I dunno man, it was a little jagged overall, but I was definitely digging the effort.

Some kinda' new stuff

IgloS · 10-20-2009, 07:57 PM

thanks for the feed cory and orbit.. I'm hit your threads up in a bit