Vintage Wine

Kara · 03-29-2006, 03:19 PM

If you were a vintage bottle of wine
And I could fill my cup
I’d savor your essence for a time
Then slowly I’d drink you up

I’d let you linger on my tongue
Delight my palate with your bouquet
My lips would bathe in your crimson pool
And I’d sit and sip all day

If you were a vintage bottle of wine
All mellow and aged in wood
I’d whirl you and swirl you around my mouth
And hold you as long as I could

I’d drink from you slowly and deeply,
And make your flavor last,
I would not stop, till the very last drop
And I’d probably lick my glass

~Eloquent · 04-01-2006, 02:50 PM

hmm
i believe i heard this idea before
but still i liked the poem cuz it was passionate and full of emotion
just it sounds like to much to soon,lol
maybe not,but overall i liked this
simple but to the point,
and just a lot of emotion
that came from you...

Poetic Concept · 04-01-2006, 04:03 PM

I liked it alot, very interesting...it was short down do the point and very sexy.

skandelous_lala · 04-02-2006, 05:48 AM

It seemed a little cutesy...I'm not sure that's the word I'm looking for exactly...
Not bad, it had a certain appeal to it in a way. Just something nice and simple.
I liked it in a certain way.

03-29-2006, 03:19 PM	#1 (permalink)
Kara Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 3	Vintage Wine If you were a vintage bottle of wine And I could fill my cup I’d savor your essence for a time Then slowly I’d drink you up I’d let you linger on my tongue Delight my palate with your bouquet My lips would bathe in your crimson pool And I’d sit and sip all day If you were a vintage bottle of wine All mellow and aged in wood I’d whirl you and swirl you around my mouth And hold you as long as I could I’d drink from you slowly and deeply, And make your flavor last, I would not stop, till the very last drop And I’d probably lick my glass

04-02-2006, 05:48 AM	#4 (permalink)
skandelous_lala back from the dead Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: Hey! Fuck you and the horse you rode in on! Posts: 26,707	It seemed a little cutesy...I'm not sure that's the word I'm looking for exactly... Not bad, it had a certain appeal to it in a way. Just something nice and simple. I liked it in a certain way. __________________ ALL YOU REALLY KNOW IS WHAT I CHOOSE TO SHOW Good Mourning, Good afternoon, Good nite, what have you done with your life?. Everybody's time comes to be embraced by the light you only afraid to die when you ain't livin right

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04-01-2006, 02:50 PM	#2 (permalink)
~Eloquent Cold Logic Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: trapped where i cant leave,Florida Posts: 3,825	hmm i believe i heard this idea before but still i liked the poem cuz it was passionate and full of emotion just it sounds like to much to soon,lol maybe not,but overall i liked this simple but to the point, and just a lot of emotion that came from you...

04-01-2006, 04:03 PM	#3 (permalink)
Poetic Concept Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Milwaukee Posts: 259	I liked it alot, very interesting...it was short down do the point and very sexy.

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