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Old 03-28-2006, 06:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Excuse me brother I know we've only crossed paths and carried on coversation once
But I want to know you
From whats your favorite color to how you treat and care for you mother
speak to me about your goals and what you like to do
I hope you don't be offend or bothered by my words
But I've been thinking of you
Wondering if your involved with anyone
and picturing your hands in my mind
wondering...
just how long is your love line?
and in time...
could you love me to the end of it?
i want to know you
from the inside out
from your mind to your heart
then back thru your soul
as i watch you dance to the rhythm
of your own beat
i see the light in you
the good and the right in you
which all brings me back to
excuse me brother i know we've only crossed paths and carried on conversation once
but i really want to know you








will you please allow me 2?
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Old 03-29-2006, 11:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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aww this is cute


keep writing and be a lil more active up in here and you will no doubt get more replies

stay up
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Old 03-30-2006, 04:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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i like this ....its very simple but just touch's u enough to keep reading.....nice drop
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Like you name and your poem!lol
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Old 04-04-2006, 07:21 PM   #5 (permalink)
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good lookin 2 all

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Old 04-14-2006, 03:37 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Very rare to find a woman come up to you on something like this. It's usually the other way around. I enjoyed the read though. Good to see you back and posting.

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Old 04-24-2006, 10:30 PM   #7 (permalink)
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^brings up a good point. Shows just how much morals have changed I guess.

Wondering if your involved with anyone
and picturing your hands in my mind
wondering...
just how long is your love line?
and in time...
could you love me to the end of it?

^This right here too. I like the opening lines though and how you broke off to the next line with "But I want to know you"-that set it off for the rest of the poem. Nice flow and everything. Keep writing, I liked this.

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