Perfect Imperfects of A Woman

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Old 03-27-2006, 01:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Perfect Imperfects of A Woman
A certain certainity unblemised by the minds of the outer world
Doubt sits well but never lives within her being
the toxins of the world never enter her body always...
Pure
of harsh chemicals and negative light
Free
thinking of her mind and freedom to guide herself
Strong
enough to maintain her household and path of right

the perfect imperfections of a woman

the perfect imperfections of my woman
finally...




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Old 03-28-2006, 01:14 AM   #2 (permalink)
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simple yet sweet id like to see more in depth with this peice but nonetheless it was dircert and sweet
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Old 03-28-2006, 06:25 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 03-30-2006, 05:03 AM   #4 (permalink)
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so many times have i writtin pieces like this sweet short to the point...love is beautiful hold on to it
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nice post short and sweet i likes
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Old 04-01-2006, 02:41 PM   #6 (permalink)
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lol...
i was thinking way to short also...
but the power of emotions..
ive definitely felt many
but hard to organize still i guess,lol
ive never fell truly,purely in love
but i feel to romantic for my own good...
at the same time though remain alone...
and keep a lot inside

i definitely felt this though
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Old 04-02-2006, 05:56 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Surpised to see it end so suddenly when I was getting into it.
It has a certain charm for a short piece and apparently you said all you needed to say, but just for me personally it would have been interesting to see it expanded more if it could have been done.
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yea, like many people said short but full of powerful description... nice...
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you used my font!!!!! argh.......

Good piece. I liked the content, but for the love of God, please show some consistency with your punctuation. You capitalized some, and then left others untouched. Maybe that's what you were going for, just something I noticed.

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