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Old 02-16-2006, 10:28 PM   #1 (permalink)
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i don't know what to write anymore
my words are like ashes fallen from my mouth
empty and bitter
dried and tasteless
and when the moon did speak to me this night
i ignored her loving plead
this night of
love and passion
intimacy and new promises

but my harp strings have been clipped
melody no longer flows here
and poetry
is but longing memories waiting for
a desperate encore

no, i'm not bitter
just
lonely

if i can make you laugh
then i'll smile

i'll walk through dreams like surging rivers
flow from one reality to another
changing channels, lanes, cars, shoes
but in the end
i'm walking with my shadows
again

in an ocean of human emotions
it's suffocating
just like
love

it's suffocating

if i can bear pain like a soldier
then
salute my broken heart

attention! march!
one!
two!
one! two! three!

seven-hundred and thirty!

days
ways i've done what felt right
but unlike symphonies
i'm just noise

inside

unbalanced, tilted, warping records
playing my theme song

just noise
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Old 02-18-2006, 08:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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but unlike symphonies
i'm just noise
wow.....I like this piece.
So damn sad, my goodness!
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no, i'm not bitter
just
lonely
Yep.....that will do it!
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Old 02-22-2006, 03:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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sad man but i can relate
you know its hard to not try to look ahead to see if you would just end up all alone again
i can never stop thinkin what happened before and how it could very well end up happening again

writers droughts happen also
and silent soldiers are strong people very well overlooked
overall this was good,but a little forced
but u said you were just making noise
noise left unheard isnt very inspiring to make noise worth somethin though
so keep at writing...
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Old 03-01-2006, 06:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
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"i'll walk through dreams like surging rivers
flow from one reality to another
changing channels, lanes, cars, shoes
but in the end
i'm walking with my shadows
again"

^Those were my favorite lines. I can relate to that so much. Just how in life you go through different stages trying to find something or somebody. And at the end you are still alone with nothing to show for your journey. I feel you.

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