a poem of eden

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Old 02-15-2006, 04:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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a poem of eden
somone once said this poem reminded them of a poetic way of telling somone to fuck off

in eden you were queen. - and I a new chalice to its grace. - your mouth curved and coiled developing cupids poison. - I was a blank canvas my mind phantom to your inching kiss- i wonder if your lips carry dawn, twisted purified white, atheist to the moon.- chaste to astronmer cestial obsession. - fragments of truth fairy tale souls once fates forbidden fruit, now dull in my twilight society. - for you i abandonedd delphic vision - speared felicity alabaster paled itself white - ethereal avarice rigid in its talk, apathy called its ghost back into my lungs - the portals which glaived summer of its scarlet, lead my idle passion to your maiden sun. - was it taken from your spirit destined to be a siren of silence- never calling forth truth serum, woven to your breath for unchained flow.- fire flies lantern your tongue, making a canopy weathered black by your ties to me. -here is your veil marry your lies, lay them in lucidity until lazarus gives you his horizon - i lived this oddessy, a passage of nectar when touched to hands they become withered, in sweetness ensconced, and comatose to an island of femine velvet thrust.-I blind found divine ether with sight i saw you had no eyes
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Old 02-15-2006, 09:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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damn.

did you write this?
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lol yea of course i wrote it
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Old 02-18-2006, 04:01 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice. I liked the last half.
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Old 02-22-2006, 03:09 PM   #5 (permalink)
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slept on like a motha fucka man,
it was like a message within a message
looks can be very decieving man
thats what i got from this
and never show your hand so quick
cuz life is a game and alot will bluff
they have ways of drawing you inot their bluff
pretty good,like a message that can be interpreted a lot of different ways by a lot of people...
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.-I blind found divine ether with sight i saw you had no eyes

....i liked that line
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lol yea of course i wrote it

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misspimp takes it up the butt!
Unfortunately for me there were way too many words in like the first four sentences that i did not understand for me to even keep reading this piece....which sucks cause i usually like most of ure work....but keep em comin

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" I was a blank canvas my mind phantom to your inching kiss- i wonder if your lips carry dawn, twisted purified white, atheist to the moon.- "

^That line was something serious man. I loved the word usage in this poem man. The last line of the poem kinda sum'd up everything. Beautifully written piece.

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