"False bent Pronunciations"

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Old 02-13-2006, 08:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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"False bent Pronunciations"

Pens Come From Pennsylvania
Vest frpm West Virginia,and Tents from
tenttessee.
He and she know Mink,




where
they
grow
mink
in
wyomink...
A camp
chair
in
New
Hampchair
that's
for
me.

And

minnows
come
from
Minnesota.

Coats

come
from
Dakota.
but
why
should
you
be
blue?

For

you,
you
come
from
Rhode
Island.

Don't

let
them
ride
Rhode
Island.

Don't

let
them
ride
Rhode
Island

It's

famous
for
you..
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Old 02-18-2006, 03:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
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This sounds like a love poem, or something around that way.

Yep.


What comes from Louisiana?
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Old 02-18-2006, 09:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I liked this. Very Unique & I agree with RealMS. I was confused at first but now that I think of it. It makes more sense!
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Old 02-22-2006, 03:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
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hmm interesting man
i really didnt see it coming
appreciation like that for someone has got to be earned,feel me?
so that is very powerful
overall i liked this
it was free flowing and wasnt to much at all
you kept it simple and still got a message across
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Old 03-02-2006, 09:25 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I feel like I've read this poem somewhere before....i really wasnt feeling it, cause I didnt understand it, and I didnt like the structure or the flow....it's different, so u get points for the creativeness...but to be honest for me...I just didnt get it

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Old 03-06-2006, 05:23 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Who
knew
that
so
many
few
words
could
put
something
so
great
togeter.
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This
was
really
nice
piece
man.


Different, but nice. Would have loved to see how it would had came out if it was made longer. Keep them coming.

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Interesting.
Can't really say I was feeling it too much. But it was definitely interesting.
I see it more as just a play on words and stuff, I don't feel much of the feeling behind it though.
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Old 03-15-2006, 11:08 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Well don't thank me too much for the riddle poem that I read somewhere... It was a play around poem that Mr G.Lee had said to pass on... So I did.. You all should know my crazy poems don't twist like this but this just caught my eye and I thought I share it.. thanks for the feedback.. Peace...
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interesting to say the least.....

i didnt much appreciate the tent one

but the others were fine

i suppose I dont see much connection between the items but farbeit for me to judge someones work
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