Little Bits Of Blue

Bobby D · 01-04-2006, 06:31 PM

Black shirt
Black jeans
Black socks
Black shoes
With little bits of blue
Peering out through

Black eyes
Black sighs
Black days
Black nights
With little bits of blue
Streaming down my face

Black heart
Black soul
Black thoughts
Pale skin
With little bits of blue
Flowing the veins within

Little bits of blue
Coming from all over
Mostly black
But little bits of blue
To tide me over..

- Bobby D

Definit_ · 01-04-2006, 07:00 PM

Black shirt
Black jeans
Black socks
Black shoes
With little bits of blue
Peering out through

Black eyes
Black sighs
Black days
Black nights
With little bits of blue

Wondeful Piece... Nice Sense Of Imagery Shown..

Creative, I Like This Alot..Stay Up

-1

Bobby D · 01-05-2006, 06:09 PM

Thanks, dude.

Quotive · 01-06-2006, 12:29 PM

I liked this.

Black socks are the shit.

There's not much to say though, but I love the simplicity of this piece. Good drop.

Pent uP · 01-07-2006, 02:29 AM

i really wish you would have continued it, gone more in depth with the black to blues

im not saying it would be easy but it'd be dope

however for what ti was i was impressed

nice one

RealMS · 01-11-2006, 05:49 PM

With little bits of blue
Peering out through

very little hope, but there is hope in you, nonetheless. That was my initial thought when reading that part. I like the opening of this. Just having one of those days and you gotta let it all out, and then begin again. Shyt's hard but there's a way. I enjoyed reading this man. Keep writing.

-Much Love

01-04-2006, 06:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
Bobby D what's the internet? Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 397	Little Bits Of Blue Black shirt Black jeans Black socks Black shoes With little bits of blue Peering out through Black eyes Black sighs Black days Black nights With little bits of blue Streaming down my face Black heart Black soul Black thoughts Pale skin With little bits of blue Flowing the veins within Little bits of blue Coming from all over Mostly black But little bits of blue To tide me over.. - Bobby D __________________ "AIDS is such a scary thing and it's also the kind of thing that you think won't happen to you. It can happen to you and it's deadly serious." Last edited by Bobby D; 01-04-2006 at 06:32 PM.

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Bobby D what's the internet? Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 397	Thanks, dude. __________________ "AIDS is such a scary thing and it's also the kind of thing that you think won't happen to you. It can happen to you and it's deadly serious."

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01-04-2006, 07:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
Definit_ P0ETiiCLiiCHE' Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: "Im From The State That Is IL" Posts: 206	Black shirt Black jeans Black socks Black shoes With little bits of blue Peering out through Black eyes Black sighs Black days Black nights With little bits of blue Wondeful Piece... Nice Sense Of Imagery Shown.. Creative, I Like This Alot..Stay Up -1

01-11-2006, 05:49 PM	#6 (permalink)
RealMS Pro 31 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lafayette/New Orleans, LA Posts: 4,230	With little bits of blue Peering out through very little hope, but there is hope in you, nonetheless. That was my initial thought when reading that part. I like the opening of this. Just having one of those days and you gotta let it all out, and then begin again. Shyt's hard but there's a way. I enjoyed reading this man. Keep writing. -Much Love

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