megan: off to the pearly gates(heaven)

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Old 01-04-2006, 12:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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it was an honor to know someone that actually understands me
I really feel that by knowing you has made me the man I am today

It actually felt okay to be me... and not worry about what others thought I should be...

Please allow me to cry... to mourn... I know where you are at is got to be better than where I am

I am... on the sofa staring at my roommate's dog typing yet another poem if that's what you wish to call it... wishing I had you to fill my boredom... wishing I had you to just talk to.. about, well just about anything... I would be so content if I could be with you right now...

But the sad truth and reality of the fact that you are no longer with me hits me harder than any other thing I ever have experienced...

I'm just trying to find a piece of mind, picking up this bottle of bud light is beginning to be tiresome... because I know it is not going to bring you back

Bring you back into my arms... however cliche that sounds... but honestly that's what I feel so hey looks like it isn't cliche after all...

I talk to Jesus on a regular basis and he offers me methods of relief from the misery... yet i don't know exactly how to use them correctly... ah well at least I'm trying

I would be so content if I could be with you right now... my eyes would shine once again... my head would stay up while around others, instead of down like right now....


I just wanted to tell you that you were amazing, and beautiful... and I pray that you will find what you were looking for all along... a piece of mind

I love you boo boo
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Old 01-04-2006, 02:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I am... on the sofa staring at my roommate's dog typing yet another poem if that's what you wish to call it... wishing I had you to fill my boredom... wishing I had you to just talk to.. about, well just about anything... I would be so content if I could be with you right now...

I Like This Piece Alot, Something I Can Relate Too

Flowed Nice As Well..As If You Were Really Typing What You Were Saying

As You Were Talkin..I Like It..Stay up



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Old 01-04-2006, 09:54 PM   #3 (permalink)
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"I talk to Jesus on a regular basis and he offers me methods of relief from the misery... yet i don't know exactly how to use them correctly... ah well at least I'm trying"


I liked how this was like it was very conversation like. Each line fed off each other well. As they were perfectly compatible and scripted just for each other. nicely done.
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^I agree this was put together well....not sure I would call it poetry the way you crafted this into a conversation....but it was cool

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i love this piece dude.. where u been?
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^^^ haahaa.. whats up bitch


I been busy with school and shit man... got me a girl and it's been hard to get online... but I'm back mos def

you still been writing up a storm in the realm man?
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Haha thanks for the feed Nate

I must say, i feel like being brutally honest and tell you this doesnt sound like a poem but more like a love letter you wish you sent....
However i think
"It actually felt okay to be me... and not worry about what others thought I should be."

was dope and brutally real

keepin it real
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I really apprecited this pieces subtleness.....it made for a very good tone regarding the concept of this.....what i like best is the truth that u portray with these emotions....i always love pieces that are truthful!!! keep em comin

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