Dewdrop Promises

[ChyllTyrant]

Dewdrop Promises


in the pits of pity i was never lent a rope
i never learned the difference between love and hate
between your face, masked, between life and pain

in the lines drawn on my face, drawing lines in sand
the wrinkle of a brow, the crinkle oft at hand
in the magna carta's magnetism of a land

on the top of a reservoir, deliverance
i'll be smiling tomorrow, crying tonight
epitomes of epitaphs strewn across our sight

on the frog's jump, a fog forging jumble esscence
of humble mumbles, stumbling tumble's lessons
on the yesterday's evanescent yes flourescence

when i am lost at the pew of rising dewdrops
when i am at the hands of gods i knew not
where we met, i synthesized wedlock

lost meter
life cheaters
dead ether
either or neither
promise
believe

[Quotive]

do u listen to sage francis? i haven't really noticed similarities, but i have lately.

this reminds me of your OLD OLD work when i first came here... you were my favorite poet, and i'd try to be like you, lol.

"when i am lost at the pew of rising dewdrops
when i am at the hands of gods i knew not
where we met, i synthesized wedlock"

Dopeness. I love the flow of this stanza.

Good job man, glad to see you reaching back to your roots.. : )

[Mind~$oul]

Great piece man. I liked the first stanza the most. Just reminds me of having to grow up on your own and finding out the troubles of life with no warning. Keep it up

One luv

[seph]

"on the frog's jump, a fog forging jumble esscence
of humble mumbles, stumbling tumble's lessons
on the yesterday's evanescent yes flourescence"


that shit was fuckin raw ill, watever is a synonym for tight dopeness

sick shit i liked your wording and style, and yea it does clutch some similarities sage francis, u listen to him?


"in the pits of pity i was never lent a rope
i never learned the difference between love and hate
between your face, masked, between life and pain"

i relate to that one a lot.. i never learned the difference between love or hate either, well idid but shit is always like that for me, not showing emotion in situations of great sorrow or great happiness
i dunno thats just me, but word up keep writin that shit was hot

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