Watch Out For The Devil IV

Black Liquid · 12-01-2005, 06:38 AM

your life
aint what
it seems

we livin
machines
playin
the "T"
in vicTim
or vicTory

they say
that theres
an "I"
in-
side
soc-I-
ety

yet
regretably
in letters
"I"
aint fit
for the team

your word

whats worse

it really
aint
worth
a
shit

like somethin
that somebody
gives
because they
cant
keep it

the devils
greatest trick?

convincin
others
that
he doesnt
exist

whats the
difference
between
the truth

and
a secret?

we

betray our
brothers

lie
like

wed die
for one
another

in the
sense
that were
all livin

consider this

its bigger
than you

business
that boom

the average
income
has it
lookin like
the end
comin
soon

my n i g g a z

are havin
children
they dont
know what
to do

the devil

can only
watch
and give
them options
to you

im the first
to warn
somebody
and
remind them
too

you know
what it is

you
know what
to do
-Liq

watch out for the devil

Bhitiah · 12-01-2005, 09:01 PM

"your life
aint what
it seems

we livin
machines
playin
the "T"
in vicTim
or vicTory

they say
that theres
an "I"
in-
side
soc-I-
ety

yet
regretably
in letters
"I"
aint fit
for the team

your word

whats worse

it really
aint
worth
a
shit

like somethin
that somebody
gives
because they
cant
keep it"

"im the first
to warn
somebody
and
remind them
too

you know
what it is

you
know what
to do"

This had a cool feeling too it ...I like the way you write sometimes...Stay up

Mind~$oul · 12-07-2005, 07:02 PM

Reminds me something UFO would preach. The devil greatest trick is tricking people into believe he doesn't exist. Yup I hear that all the time man. Nicely written poem

Uppin for the sleepers

One luv

RealMS · 12-11-2005, 11:53 PM

Man, I like your poems. I could read this stuff repeatedly.

your word

whats worse

it really
aint
worth
a
shit

like somethin
that somebody
gives
because they
cant
keep it

This got me thinking two things at once. Like the DA on an innocent man, etc. They love the world "irrelevant," esp. when the word corresponds with "you." Then it had me thinking how some people don't keep their word on things.
Dang, keep writing you.

-Much Love

12-01-2005, 06:38 AM	#1 (permalink)
Black Liquid Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 234	Watch Out For The Devil IV your life aint what it seems we livin machines playin the "T" in vicTim or vicTory they say that theres an "I" in- side soc-I- ety yet regretably in letters "I" aint fit for the team your word whats worse it really aint worth a shit like somethin that somebody gives because they cant keep it the devils greatest trick? convincin others that he doesnt exist whats the difference between the truth and a secret? we betray our brothers lie like wed die for one another in the sense that were all livin consider this its bigger than you business that boom the average income has it lookin like the end comin soon my n i g g a z are havin children they dont know what to do the devil can only watch and give them options to you im the first to warn somebody and remind them too you know what it is you know what to do -Liq watch out for the devil

12-01-2005, 09:01 PM	#2 (permalink)
Bhitiah Powerful Scriptures Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,168	"your life aint what it seems we livin machines playin the "T" in vicTim or vicTory they say that theres an "I" in- side soc-I- ety yet regretably in letters "I" aint fit for the team your word whats worse it really aint worth a shit like somethin that somebody gives because they cant keep it" "im the first to warn somebody and remind them too you know what it is you know what to do" This had a cool feeling too it ...I like the way you write sometimes...Stay up __________________ You can bomb the world to peices, but cant bomb into peace

12-07-2005, 07:02 PM	#3 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,145	Reminds me something UFO would preach. The devil greatest trick is tricking people into believe he doesn't exist. Yup I hear that all the time man. Nicely written poem Uppin for the sleepers One luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

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12-11-2005, 11:53 PM	#4 (permalink)
RealMS Pro 31 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lafayette/New Orleans, LA Posts: 4,236	Man, I like your poems. I could read this stuff repeatedly. your word whats worse it really aint worth a shit like somethin that somebody gives because they cant keep it This got me thinking two things at once. Like the DA on an innocent man, etc. They love the world "irrelevant," esp. when the word corresponds with "you." Then it had me thinking how some people don't keep their word on things. Dang, keep writing you. -Much Love

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