I am only happy when it reigns because it is always raining

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Old 09-04-2005, 06:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I am only happy when it reigns because it is always raining
I am only happy when it rains
Out pours my frustrations like birds song on windowpanes
Down pours my heart
In this life, in this game
We play puppet roles

Dazed and confused I wallow
Lost yet stayed in the fact that purgatory is now,
And I am in limbo
Insignificant chaos occurs around me,

Where is my salvation?
Where is my peace?
It resides beneath heavens gates
In the cradle of existence
Least,
Of my worries heaven or hell
It’s raining,
Where is my metaphorical umbrella?
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Old 09-05-2005, 06:46 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hmmm I found this interesting. Mostly b/c of the last lines...the first thing that came to mind was "what is your metaphorical umbrella?"
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Old 09-07-2005, 03:15 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Sucks that this is getting slept on. I love when it rains and I don't see how anybody cannot feel the same way. It like a mental massage. Best time to reflect on things.

Last line was catchy though.


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Old 09-07-2005, 12:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanx mind and soul for the support, it seems that most of my work is slept on and i dont know why, but oh well.. people like what they like, i dunno, i appreciate the support

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Old 09-09-2005, 03:30 AM   #5 (permalink)
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"Insignificant chaos occurs around me"
that is a really good line, shows how your path through life consists of all these things that are insignificant and halt you from your truer purpose.
"Where is my salvation?
Where is my peace?
It resides beneath heavens gates
In the cradle of existence
Least,
Of my worries heaven or hell"
The way I interpreted is that you would rather find some kind of salvation or purpose in your time here beneath heaven or above hell, as in you want to live for the moment and find your purpose in this world, you don't see heaven or hell as an escape or a divine solution.

From what I read, you shouldn't be getting slept on, and if I see any pieces of yours up on here I will show you some love, coz this was real nice.
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Read others and spread that around my buddy! And if you are and have been well I don't know what to tell you about that

Lost yet stayed in the fact that purgatory is now,
And I am in limbo
Insignificant chaos occurs around me,
Man, I heard that. It's like, how do you stay sane in a place where it's so much the opposite? Somehow you manage, but it goes unnoticed until everything starts to really bug you out. Keep writing.

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I liked this, espeically making out people to play as puppets perhaps to different music. I thought the piece was good, and also, metaphorical umbrella was a point in the poem even though it was at the end that raises the attention. It's obscure, but its nice.

Hope to read more of your work in the future.
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diggin this one X.....short and sweet.....very unique....and sort of parellals with current events.....interesting twist of words....that umbrella line kinda stuck with me for some reason....reminds me of my sisters umbrella theory....crazy concept but gets deep....I feel like you touched the surface of something great here....Now I'm curious to see what would happen if you stuck your whole hand in and explore this idea further?....ya know

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