Long But Worth A Look

[misspimp]

Weve Got Judges
Preachers
Teachers
Knowledge Givers
Knowledge Seekers
Preying On Innocent Minds
Truth Be Told
The Blind
Is Leading The Blind
Muhfuckers Claiming
To Know It All
When In Reality
They Rubbing Together
Nickels And Dimes
Trying To Find
Their Way
Just Like You And I
All Of Us
Black
Chinese
Hispanic
Whites
All In The Fight
To Stay Alive
So Why
Are Our Cultures
Still So Divided
With World War
Natural Disaters
Were Sitting Around
Comparing And Dividing
The # Of Whites
Vs. Blacks
When In Fact
Jesus Is The Reason
For This Season
And We Are The Cause
Of These Effects
We're Walking Around
Filled With Carelessness
When Others Have
No Food
Clothes
Or A Place Of Residence
And Instead Of Praying
We Blaming It On
The President
When One Man
Can Not Be The Only Upliftance
Of One Land
Divided We Fall
United We Stand


I Know Some Cant Understand
Bush's Re-election
But Imagine
Changing Generals
In The Middle Of War
Plus The Bible Says
God Makes That Selection
Ir-regardless
Were Pointing The Target
Towards Our Own Destruction
But We Too Busy
Fucking
Fussing
Killing
Stealing
Drinkin
Smoking
Keeping Our Minds Poisened
And Potent
With Garbage Ass Music
While Frontin On Corners
And In Clubs
"video Possing"
Taking Off More And More Clothes
Showing
Ass
Tities
Chest
Pecks
And Everything Else
No Imagination Needed
This Nation Is Bleeding
We Fighting Uneccessary Wars
Against Ourselves
Most Of All
Cause The Devil
Is Already Defeated

What We Need Is To Pray
But Who Am I To Say
Judge
Or Tell Anyone What To Do
Cause Like I Said Earlier
My Shit Dont Smell Like Roses
But Yo Shit Stank Too!
Everyone Claiming To Be Of Truth
But Who Of Us
Is Without Sin
Regardless Of What Or Who
You Believe In
Heaven
No Hell
Higher Beings
Deeper Meanings
God
Jesus
The Trinity
Allah
Or Non Of The Above
We All Know The Difference
From Whats Wrong
And Whats Right
But We Too Blind
In Our Own Minds
To Spread Love
Instead Of Hate
To Educate
Congregate
Fellowship
And Uplioft
Instead We Wanna Diss
Dismiss
While Throwing Shade
And Piss
And Even Tho This Poem
May Make Me The Biggest Of Hypocrits
Atleast I Shared It
The End Is Coming
The Revelation Is Definetly Near
And I Got One Question
Are Your Sins Worth Dying For?
Or Is God Your One And Only Fear?

-ek

**sorry For Any Fucked Up Spelling Or Made Up Words....hope U All Like!!

Mad Love

[RealMS]

made up words, I got a habit of that when writing. Then I'll be trying to find the dictionary. I remember in creative writing class I said the word "independency" lol, my teacher was like, "that was wonderful but what is 'independency?'" lol

I like this piece-and girl some parts hit home down here and I feel the same as what you're saying, esp. the first part. Wasn't long at all to me. Keep writing girl. Glad to see you're still writing.

-Much Love!

[skandelous_lala]

It hits me on a certain level, for sure. I would be lying if I said it didn't. It kind of makes me think about some of the shit I've been preaching lately and sourta even makes me think maybe I should think a little bit more before I speak sometimes even though I'm usually very careful about my words *heh*

But regardless it does make you think and I like that about it.

There are parts of the content I don't agree with..but no need to go there..you didn't post it for me to argue it

Thank you for sharing this.

[AlmostFamous]

misspimp holy %$#$ this was amazing....

i dont think i should even say anything about this... dont want to discredit it...lol

you are truly one of the best writers on this site... heres what i thought hit me the most...

Weve Got Judges
Preachers
Teachers
Knowledge Givers
Knowledge Seekers

Hats off to you... mos def.. I got that tingling sensation running through me right now...

[Mind~$oul]

Don't think I've seen you write a piece dealing with this type of subject. Some parts I agree with but there were other parts I didn't feel. Like I really hate when people say god/jesus is the reason for every little thing that happens. Overall I enjoyed the piece. Good to see you back

One Luv

[~Eloquent]

now this was very heavy
but a lot of strong thoughts out there

its funny cuz i found myself very frusterated earlier today with the constant comparison of race
i felt you touched on that perfectly
its no ones fault but mother natures
the humidity is crazy in the air and the world is crumbling
it feels like its very close to the beginning of the end if you ask me
still people are acting very petty
when i guess well get lost in our dreams of ever coming together as one in the human race

"imagine changin generals in the middle of the war"
exactly,im no Bush fan neither
but exactly,that was very well put
i hate the war all together though
crazy amount of money being spent just for thousands more to die
this was very thought provoking and i thought it was great
"the blind is leading the blind"
so true...

[Brit Boi Gee]

this was an interesting response to the dissaster. I liked how the piece flowed and fell as if in a quikening pace. cool poem

[iceheart]

i was really feelin those lines about how we cant blame it all on the president.

and technically, we have switched generals in the middle of a war - we did it four or five times in the civil war. at least three times.

just fyi.

still a damn fine drop.
i always like your work. i liked it way back when i first was here, and i still like it now.