Fools always fall in love

AlmostFamous · 09-01-2005, 02:06 PM

I’m unsure of what to do…. When it comes to loving you

What exactly it is that I have to do…. What steps to take… so afraid of making a mistake

All my friends tell me that I am surely a fool

That I am weak for exposing my feelings to a “bitch”…

That I am whipped and not in control of the situation….

I hear them… but I don’t make decisions based off of someone else’s views

I love the fact that I love you and not some other girl

I could add to the line a cliché statement… like you are my world

And that you make me complete… it would only be cliché if I didn’t mean it…

I don’t throw “I love you” around very often… it has to be a special someone

My love for you has grown more than I ever anticipated… I must be a fool

Because I fell in love once again… no need to pretend…. I love you

I aint going nowhere

ManMadeofAshes · 09-01-2005, 02:16 PM

dude your such a fuckin whore.

lol. naw man I can relate to this for real. Feeling like the fool. I feel in love with a lesbian so this pain I know all to well. No control no control.

moral of the story.... it took a year and a half... but I finally got inside her head! (down her pants??) ha and it sounds so great, and I thought the fuck would be great (and it wasssss) but, I realized when she left that I was in love with her. Like the fuck was fun physically.. but it was her I was after not her flesh. Never felt that way about a girl before. Sad part is we have different endings my man. I moved away....

heart felt man. your font is bleeding heart red. nice touch eh.

-ashes

AlmostFamous · 09-01-2005, 02:21 PM

are you canadian^^lol

cause you said eh... i hear ya on the whole lesbian thing man... ive been in a similar situation when i was in the military, only I wasnt successful in getting in her pants!! lol

do you ever talk to her anymore or are yall just not cool like that anymore?

thanks for peeping fam... peace and oh yeah keep the whore word outta ya mouth... or ill tell my mom!!

*exits thread running to tell mumsy...lol

MISSKEYdaQUEEN · 09-01-2005, 06:18 PM

Quote:

I aint going nowhere

^^^^^^Perfect ending!! ahhhh haaaa..yes

It's that moment you feel week and you give in..it's called the "AWWfuckit" feeling!!lol

nice job man!!

Quotive · 09-01-2005, 07:26 PM

"I could add to the line a cliché statement… like you are my world

And that you make me complete… it would only be cliché if I didn't mean it"

Damn, that's crazy dope fresh lol. I love that line. The poem overall was decent. Nothing great, you're a talented writer through. Your last two pieces have been ehhhh (no, I'm not Canadian, lol) but it's all good.

Nice drop.

KAtpower · 09-01-2005, 11:15 PM

I thought it was kool that you made the point that you're friends are saying your whooped (like your not your own person in this relationship... but then you illustrate how you stand your ground and keep it real to yourslef by sticking around (which contradicts their accususations)

thanks for sharing.

AlmostFamous · 09-02-2005, 09:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Quotive

"I could add to the line a cliché statement… like you are my world

And that you make me complete… it would only be cliché if I didn't mean it"

Damn, that's crazy dope fresh lol. I love that line. The poem overall was decent. Nothing great, you're a talented writer through. Your last two pieces have been ehhhh (no, I'm not Canadian, lol) but it's all good.

Nice drop.

haha.. thanks for peeping fam... what did you do for you birthday bro...

misskey and Katpower im gonna mos def be on the look out for you two... ill peep ya out

peace and your feed is always appreciated

ManMadeofAshes · 09-06-2005, 01:45 PM

uppin. (you whore)

RealMS · 09-08-2005, 01:36 AM

That's something to look upon. I don't think fools always fall in love, haha you know I had to take it there. I could add to that thought but I'm not really feeling the whole fall in love ideal right now. But, I know where you're comin from. I had some buddies go through this situation--seems like the girl is always playing games with dude's emotions like that's what its made for, and of course vice versa in other situations, different people. And OF COURSE YOU cannot be the one to let that person know that you see what's going on. Because you're not the person in the situation. I guess. It sucks when you gotta watch your friend get hurt like that, but it doesn't last forever. True that. Keep writing.

-Much Love

absolute zero · 09-08-2005, 02:58 AM

I could add to the line a cliché statement… like you are my world

And that you make me complete… it would only be cliché if I didn’t mean it…

word.....that's deep man.

God Bless.

09-01-2005, 02:06 PM	#1 (permalink)
AlmostFamous U got a problem? Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Sioux Falls Posts: 2,789	Fools always fall in love I’m unsure of what to do…. When it comes to loving you What exactly it is that I have to do…. What steps to take… so afraid of making a mistake All my friends tell me that I am surely a fool That I am weak for exposing my feelings to a “bitch”… That I am whipped and not in control of the situation…. I hear them… but I don’t make decisions based off of someone else’s views I love the fact that I love you and not some other girl I could add to the line a cliché statement… like you are my world And that you make me complete… it would only be cliché if I didn’t mean it… I don’t throw “I love you” around very often… it has to be a special someone My love for you has grown more than I ever anticipated… I must be a fool Because I fell in love once again… no need to pretend…. I love you I aint going nowhere __________________ the good lord giveth and he taketh away isnt that the truth My name is Nate Short MYSPACE NAME:http://www.myspace.com/tooshortnate

09-01-2005, 02:16 PM	#2 (permalink)
ManMadeofAshes *DREAMER Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: at home Posts: 635	dude your such a fuckin whore. lol. naw man I can relate to this for real. Feeling like the fool. I feel in love with a lesbian so this pain I know all to well. No control no control. moral of the story.... it took a year and a half... but I finally got inside her head! (down her pants??) ha and it sounds so great, and I thought the fuck would be great (and it wasssss) but, I realized when she left that I was in love with her. Like the fuck was fun physically.. but it was her I was after not her flesh. Never felt that way about a girl before. Sad part is we have different endings my man. I moved away.... heart felt man. your font is bleeding heart red. nice touch eh. -ashes __________________ http://www.myspace.com/manmadeofashes

09-01-2005, 02:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
AlmostFamous U got a problem? Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Sioux Falls Posts: 2,789	are you canadian^^lol cause you said eh... i hear ya on the whole lesbian thing man... ive been in a similar situation when i was in the military, only I wasnt successful in getting in her pants!! lol do you ever talk to her anymore or are yall just not cool like that anymore? thanks for peeping fam... peace and oh yeah keep the whore word outta ya mouth... or ill tell my mom!! exits thread running to tell mumsy...lol __________________ the good lord giveth and he taketh away isnt that the truth My name is Nate Short* MYSPACE NAME:http://www.myspace.com/tooshortnate

09-06-2005, 01:45 PM	#8 (permalink)
ManMadeofAshes *DREAMER Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: at home Posts: 635	uppin. (you whore) __________________ http://www.myspace.com/manmadeofashes

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09-01-2005, 11:15 PM	#6 (permalink)
KAtpower Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 28	I thought it was kool that you made the point that you're friends are saying your whooped (like your not your own person in this relationship... but then you illustrate how you stand your ground and keep it real to yourslef by sticking around (which contradicts their accususations) thanks for sharing.

09-08-2005, 01:36 AM	#9 (permalink)
RealMS Pro 31 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lafayette/New Orleans, LA Posts: 4,236	That's something to look upon. I don't think fools always fall in love, haha you know I had to take it there. I could add to that thought but I'm not really feeling the whole fall in love ideal right now. But, I know where you're comin from. I had some buddies go through this situation--seems like the girl is always playing games with dude's emotions like that's what its made for, and of course vice versa in other situations, different people. And OF COURSE YOU cannot be the one to let that person know that you see what's going on. Because you're not the person in the situation. I guess. It sucks when you gotta watch your friend get hurt like that, but it doesn't last forever. True that. Keep writing. -Much Love

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