because its everyone.

ManMadeofAshes · 09-01-2005, 06:32 AM

and so she claims that she can't write.
I told her
"you've been doing this all of your life"
and she tried to tell me that was a lie
but poems are just thoughts in your mind

your pen is just there to help you remember.

NAiT · 09-01-2005, 12:13 PM

where's the rest of it?

RealMS · 09-01-2005, 10:14 PM

Goodness. hah^yeah I know right? Still though, I never think about the length when I'm about to read something on here. It's always a surprise, just like the message. Titles only seem to speak for themselves and there still isn't much justice to that. Anyway, you told me just that, which is probably why I'm almost trippin right now. I read this at perfect timing; I have not written in so long man. (Siamese!) Keep writing

-Much Love

KAtpower · 09-01-2005, 11:11 PM

this little piece , I think is complete becase it brings forth an imporant message... that life itslef is art that has not yet materialized inot any given medium.. thoughts in one's mind is art, but not yet turned to poetry.
nice write.

and thanks for your comment earlier,

Kat

Mind~$oul · 09-02-2005, 09:28 AM

"...for poems are like rainbows: they escape you quickly"-Langston Hughes.

That's the first thing that came to my mind after reading this short piece. Nice message you brought to the reader.

One luv

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Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,139	"...for poems are like rainbows: they escape you quickly"-Langston Hughes. That's the first thing that came to my mind after reading this short piece. Nice message you brought to the reader. One luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

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09-01-2005, 10:14 PM	#3 (permalink)
RealMS Pro 31 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lafayette/New Orleans, LA Posts: 4,184	Goodness. hah^yeah I know right? Still though, I never think about the length when I'm about to read something on here. It's always a surprise, just like the message. Titles only seem to speak for themselves and there still isn't much justice to that. Anyway, you told me just that, which is probably why I'm almost trippin right now. I read this at perfect timing; I have not written in so long man. (Siamese!) Keep writing -Much Love

09-01-2005, 11:11 PM	#4 (permalink)
KAtpower Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 28	this little piece , I think is complete becase it brings forth an imporant message... that life itslef is art that has not yet materialized inot any given medium.. thoughts in one's mind is art, but not yet turned to poetry. nice write. and thanks for your comment earlier, Kat

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