Insignificant Elements

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Old 08-04-2005, 11:47 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Insignificant Elements

Sunsets are seen by all.
Interpreted by many,
And redefined by all.
Some people see the sunset as an end,
As a beginning,
Or even as an event in the continual revolution we live in.
The last is to see it as insignificant and as a distraction to what is important,
And to need that.
To see it as a personal arsenal for your mind to escape purpose, propaganda, and problems.
To unveil that everything does not need meaning, but is simply to be.
The sunset in the city the same as in the mountains.
No matter the sea it’s the sun over the water.
All people sitting on the same hill no matter its steepness.
Some call it God’s painting,
To call it so is to give this meaningless expression of nature,
Structure.
To which there is none, so randomly created through the entire day.
There is no significance.
But the sunset is loved,
Love is not meaningful.
As random as the cloud across the sun,
As colorful as the blue, violet, and violent red of the sky.
So is the sunset the meaning of love?
For the meaning of love is never considered the sunset.

Each star seen by all,
Interpreted by many,
And redefined by all.
When the stars appear in the night,
They are connected by the human mind.
Creating colossal mythological figures,
Or telling galactic stories of existence.
One being false,
The other being possible,
Neither one being right.
The stars give confidence in so many.
Reaching for the stars becomes out of reach, too far,
And all who reach grab nothing, and hit the ground hard,
When the stars align,
From another view they simply move into another spot.
The stars placed not by God, not by explosions,
But by scientifically random places of existence.
No intelligence, but science.
Where chemicals create each other and do nothing more.
Simply life.
Life in its own category.
But the stars are cherished.
All bodies gravitate to them,
The essence of all things the human mind is, is the stars.
So are the stars the meaning of life?
For the meaning of life is not the stars.

The sunset and the stars.
So far from the same.
Occurring at time’s that combine, but do not remain.
As the sun falls, we fall with it,
Into the slumber.
To see its violet, red, and blue in our dreams.
Wanting to see its beauty the next day,
But not always does event recycle.
It may fall for days and the colors remain gray,
Slight red’s that give warning to the storm yet to come.
When the stars appear, sight appear with them.
There is beauty and a curiosity
Dreams of what is to come from these stars are conducted by all minds.
But not always is there an answer to these manifestations.
Both the sunset and the stars.
Allowing nothing but a conduct for our mind’s.
An escape from routine,
A reason life can be easier with times of disorder.
The conductor on the train with no track.
The sunset and the stars
Working together when the star sets on our horizon,
It lets its other pointless blessings provoke.
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Man, People be sleeping on you too? There are a few people in here that get no love, You ChyllTyrant and a few others. Str8 weak.

Anyway, If they wanna sleep on the best let em...I'll boycott em for you? Ok? lol

Nah, I love your writing, I really do...I'm glad you've been posting.
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This shit is interesting...not quite..uh..

hmmm..it's like kind of an off the wall approah but the flow and structure was good!

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I read this a few days ago and I almost had nerve to reply that this was messing with my mind and leave it at that, but I just wasn't getting myself into it at the time I guess. Reading it now, 2x-it still has that effect somewhat-like whhhhhat? It's a subject matter, something I would probably have wanted to write about (one of those things) but never do. Everytime I read something in the realm, I think that. And this is one of those things! And how it ends, it doesn't leave wondering-AT ALL. That, is great. It just makes me think on. It made me go outside to look at the stars for real lol, but man its cloudy. Even the moon is covered up. Man anyway I'm glad I read this. Keep writing. Dang.

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Introspective like a mothafucka. This is one of them pieces that gives you a better appreciation(sp) for things that go unnoticed. I live in the city so it's kinda hurt to focus on the stars and sunset with so much shit going around. This is one of my favorite pieces from you wicked. Well all see things different.

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wooord up...this was very interesting....dont really agree with your breakdown of the sunset and stars...I mean the stars do have a purpose and they are used for signs and navigation....and I dont need to explain the importance of the sun...but yeah I can see how sunsets reflect this meaning of love and whatnot...love the imagery and what not....lot of what you said was true...and the rest is all your opinion so I can respect that....I can agree maybe with the sunset being an insignificant element....I mean yes its wonderful and amazing and symbolizes so much but thats where it stops...now the sun itself is deeper then that....if you wanna talk about meaning of life and all....and the stars I cant just throw away so quick because I believe they are not just randomly up there....but I wont get into how the Zodiac is God's sign for us to fulfill his promise in JC....if you toss away these elements might as well toss everything else with it thats beatuiful and meaningful in the world....how bout rainbows, birds, grand canyon, rookie moutains, ocean, waterfalls, ants, icefields, etc.............that list can go on forever theres to much beatuy in the world to just spit on it and throw it all away, its like dissing God himself for his handiwork.....hahaha....naw this stuff is not insignificant but perhaps there meanings go beyond our understanding ya know?

I dunno maybe I'm looking too deep into the matter...I really enjoyed the poem as you can see but I just dont agree with the disregarding the stars and what not....but I feel you on the played out meanings that follow the stars and sunsets....mans failed attempts to label God's work......

props for this got me fired up this morning

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i liked this poem..i just wish i could agree with most of it :-)....

FAvorite Line:
Dreams of what is to come from these stars are conducted by all minds.

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Lovely piece. You looked so deep into something that most of us take for granted everyday...I love it when people do that.

I found it almost ironic I guess...the way you were trying to put meaning into these things by writing this piece and then at the same time...almost saying there was no meaning...it made it very interesting.

It's really a poem that I could read multiple times and could probably grasp something different each and every time from it.
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