Eve

broken_wings113 · 08-03-2005, 09:43 PM

Look into my eyes beyond these plastic lens
What do you see in those brown pools that led Adam out of Eden
Fear maybe lust maybe someone seeking Power
Someone bidding time waiting on that Glorious hour
When they bite into that fruit
Eyes wide open
Cotton wisked away
That second of pleasure so intense
Realisation in its purest form
Knowledge so concentrated it hits you like your first orgasm
And the minute you release that breath
You see....
Scared.. don't know wat you've just done
You cover your body
Ashamed no one look at me
You're naked and embarassed
Someone knows you through and through
Innocence lost
Child no longer
Fruit in hand beckoning to you
Come with me and you do
I know this i have the power to seduce
Innnocence lost.... I've been tricked
But really i wanted it
So look into my eyes beyond the lies
Deep down in those metal framed eyes
Manipulation...I get what i want
Power is mine
Power sweet as forbidden fruit
The taste on my tongue
I'll never forget
Innocence lost
I'm a condemned soul
Goddess me
NO...it's just the Eve in me
No actually
Maybe Eve is me...
Fruit in hand
Skin soft as silk
Beckoning you on
But in my eyes the underlying truth
I am Eve
Trust me no more.

RealMS · 08-04-2005, 05:33 PM

Goddess me
NO...it's just the Eve in me
No actually
Maybe Eve is me...<--good line

Despite how it began this was blunt unlike a lot of stuff I write these days. I'm starting to like your stuff. Keep writing. Sorry I'm not saying much, I'll come back around.

-Much Love

broken_wings113 · 08-04-2005, 07:00 PM

thanks a lot and well i will keep writing since well i have nothing better to do withmy time than write... and think...

08-03-2005, 09:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
broken_wings113 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Beyond these glasses in the depths of my soul.... Posts: 117	Eve Look into my eyes beyond these plastic lens What do you see in those brown pools that led Adam out of Eden Fear maybe lust maybe someone seeking Power Someone bidding time waiting on that Glorious hour When they bite into that fruit Eyes wide open Cotton wisked away That second of pleasure so intense Realisation in its purest form Knowledge so concentrated it hits you like your first orgasm And the minute you release that breath You see.... Scared.. don't know wat you've just done You cover your body Ashamed no one look at me You're naked and embarassed Someone knows you through and through Innocence lost Child no longer Fruit in hand beckoning to you Come with me and you do I know this i have the power to seduce Innnocence lost.... I've been tricked But really i wanted it So look into my eyes beyond the lies Deep down in those metal framed eyes Manipulation...I get what i want Power is mine Power sweet as forbidden fruit The taste on my tongue I'll never forget Innocence lost I'm a condemned soul Goddess me NO...it's just the Eve in me No actually Maybe Eve is me... Fruit in hand Skin soft as silk Beckoning you on But in my eyes the underlying truth I am Eve Trust me no more. Last edited by broken_wings113; 08-03-2005 at 09:48 PM.

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08-04-2005, 05:33 PM	#2 (permalink)
RealMS Pro 31 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lafayette/New Orleans, LA Posts: 4,230	Goddess me NO...it's just the Eve in me No actually Maybe Eve is me...<--good line Despite how it began this was blunt unlike a lot of stuff I write these days. I'm starting to like your stuff. Keep writing. Sorry I'm not saying much, I'll come back around. -Much Love

08-04-2005, 07:00 PM	#3 (permalink)
broken_wings113 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Beyond these glasses in the depths of my soul.... Posts: 117	thanks a lot and well i will keep writing since well i have nothing better to do withmy time than write... and think...

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