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Old 08-03-2005, 08:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The best part of any tale....
Come considerably open minded, and
Let me tell you of a glorious city.
Oh! How the Winter's would set in,
Trapping all of her pawns on board.
And on Christmas trees, the splinters would wear thin, and again....

And the tale is told
As the paper folds.


Travel lightly on lukewarm waters.
Since the Spring is Summer's prelude,
They'll let the grass walk with them,
And lie down to glass marksmenship.
A word is not a word until it's written in prose.

Judgement can be passed
On the most bland of days.


I guess what I'm really trying to say is:
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Old 08-03-2005, 10:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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lol what are you trying to say?
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Old 08-04-2005, 07:12 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I love you too absolute.

But man I really couldn't get the full meaning of this piece. One of them pieces where the writer kinda leaves it up to the reader to make it out of whatever they can get from it. I've really been loving your work as of lately though. I've said it before, but it just seems like you constantly reachin new levels. Keep it up

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Old 08-05-2005, 04:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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One of them pieces where the writer kinda leaves it up to the reader to make it out of whatever they can get from it.
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^^ that was cool...I dont know why, I just ...Damn...

This was cool ...
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A word is not a word until it's written in prose.

one word at a time^ this line was nice man. Your stuff is always interesting, not aggravating. It's like experiments, if that makes some sense. Keep writing.

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Old 08-09-2005, 01:47 PM   #7 (permalink)
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lol

this was nice..

the best line in my opinion

was the one real ms quoted

a word is not a word until it's written in prose

mos def man like that line.. its got alot of depth but at the same time its simple

well put

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Old 08-12-2005, 05:59 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I enjoyed this...

favorite lines...

Judgement can be passed
On the most bland of days.

that is deep and penetrating my mind...;) keep it upp...
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Old 08-12-2005, 12:12 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Nope..i'm not in the moment with you dog, but...I appreciate you sharing this..

maybe it will come back to me once I reread it..
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