a text verse? a poem? silence.

Baron Downs · 08-03-2005, 01:05 PM

i walk amongst those, who none would roll with
those who do not know that silence is golden

silence is golden, noone should know this best
then those who hold no souls, no text, just breath
so quick to second guess, that from which birthed
the imagination, that worked and served
the origin, the start, the poor n the starved
the art from which gave us the elements....
graff, bboying, all that seems heaven sent
and its evident, that some have forgotten while...
they step-son, like writing's bastard child
without the gift of writing, rap wouldnt be facin
your wrath's in the past...grow an imagination
text is what you make it, diverse and shit
but why be cursin it? listen to ya verses kids
dont even sound into it
while we can hear ya voice, writing is infinite
the thing is endlessness, while its trouble your holden

those who do not know that silence is golden

Quotive · 08-03-2005, 01:13 PM

I like this... a lot. I rap, so I guess that's why.

I have a piece just like this.. I love the references to b-boying and graffiti.

Welcome here, I dunno if you've posted before, but if not keep posting b/c I like your style.

Sole Sovereign · 08-03-2005, 03:22 PM

I'm with Quo on this. I liked, but the style seems VERY familiar. Where else do you post? Or have you posted here before?

Baron Downs · 08-03-2005, 04:08 PM

im from bboys com actually.

Thanks for the positive feed and the warm welcome

Baron Downs · 08-04-2005, 02:26 PM

Upper

FreakEmoWriter9 · 08-05-2005, 05:56 PM

nice piece, i agree about the whole cursin thing. keep spreading feed and more feed you'll recieve.

08-03-2005, 01:05 PM	#1 (permalink)
Baron Downs Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 74	a text verse? a poem? silence. i walk amongst those, who none would roll with those who do not know that silence is golden silence is golden, noone should know this best then those who hold no souls, no text, just breath so quick to second guess, that from which birthed the imagination, that worked and served the origin, the start, the poor n the starved the art from which gave us the elements.... graff, bboying, all that seems heaven sent and its evident, that some have forgotten while... they step-son, like writing's bastard child without the gift of writing, rap wouldnt be facin your wrath's in the past...grow an imagination text is what you make it, diverse and shit but why be cursin it? listen to ya verses kids dont even sound into it while we can hear ya voice, writing is infinite the thing is endlessness, while its trouble your holden those who do not know that silence is golden

08-03-2005, 03:22 PM	#3 (permalink)
Sole Sovereign Hungry But Never Starving Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 2,927	I'm with Quo on this. I liked, but the style seems VERY familiar. Where else do you post? Or have you posted here before? __________________ ...Take a step: one step, one dive... ...Fate is death. A leap of faith over sunset's sunrise... ...Hate is everpresent, some let love die... ...even if you laced loosely, some get tongue tied... elo§overeign ˜W™

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08-03-2005, 04:08 PM	#4 (permalink)
Baron Downs Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 74	im from bboys com actually. Thanks for the positive feed and the warm welcome

08-04-2005, 02:26 PM	#5 (permalink)
Baron Downs Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 74	Upper

08-05-2005, 05:56 PM	#6 (permalink)
FreakEmoWriter9 Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Location: AZ Posts: 112	nice piece, i agree about the whole cursin thing. keep spreading feed and more feed you'll recieve.

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