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Old 08-02-2005, 12:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This
This is
Beautiful

This right here?

This
These tones
The contrast
Dark on light
Ivory atop mahogany
You under me
Beneath you
Right here

This
This is
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Old 08-02-2005, 01:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Seeee...you have a style kinda like mine I can tell...or at least this piece.

it's hard to describe. The desire to provoke that feeling..that visual

This piece was short but..it has impact..
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Old 08-02-2005, 03:53 PM   #3 (permalink)
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hmm this was nice. I think I have something against short pieces though-I just can't get into them. But I'm taking it for what it is, lol. This started off well, but then its like poof. I think I need to write a short poem. Keep writing.

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Old 08-02-2005, 04:14 PM   #4 (permalink)
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nicely put together, but I wouldn't mind a little more. Its like a condom with no sex and that doesn't do anyone any good.
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Very short...

It takes a fucking great, thoughtful poet to make short pieces work..

This was decent, at best. I liked it for what it was, like Real said... ya know?

Cool drop..
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wtf are you talking about?? wat does the poem mean? not to be rude, its just that i cant figure some of these poems i see here
an everyone's like OMG this was amazing, creative and everything, i bet half of them are talkin shit. no offence tho just my assumption, im gonna drop something
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are you talkin about havin sex with a black man?
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are you talkin about havin sex with a black man?
If you wanna REALLY over-symplify it, yes...

It's a little bit deeper than that, though (at least I'd like to think so)

It's about the beauty of literal contrast, about how remarkable it is to be intimate with someone who is so physically different from you and the beauty in transcending those differences...

Scratch the surface a little bith Thrilla, it's poetry...
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