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Old 05-23-2005, 07:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What’s a title that will get yall attention?
Sometimes I feel like killing,
Often chose to say fuck the system,
Never free from the likes of drilling
Sovereign thoughts of wrath!

Anger shaken words of wisdom,
Christians covert, books we give them,
To many deaths from lack of giving,
Integrate Iraq!

I’m living in the just, today,
Oil breed deaths, from childish play,
Never will they hear me say,
“That I agree with that”

Precious sources, feed divorces,
Mistress is the war,

Vietnam,
This time Saddam,
Visions, seen before

Oil is such a precious fuck,
Iraq is now our new found whore,
I choose not to take a turn,
Prostitution’s wrong!

Pimp the people, rape their land,
Call us all Americans,
Haughty thieves, subconscious crooks,
Who wrote the history books?
Omitting facts that all attack,
The façade that we all trust,
***** pie, I wanna die,
Corrupt, the USA…
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Old 05-26-2005, 05:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I guess you failed on the title man lol. But this was a great poem man. It started off kinda slow to me but by the time I got to the end I was glad that I read it.

You painted a perfect picture of how things are in Iraq. How people are just over there sucking the life out of the people and country(oil). Not caring who dies, just as long as the money continue to flows. Not gonna get any better any time soon.

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Old 05-26-2005, 06:05 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Oil is such a precious fuck,
Iraq is now our new found whore,
I choose not to take a turn,
Prostitution’s wrong!
I love that quote! So real its another one too..... but I love that its so true. :)
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Old 05-26-2005, 10:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Very good job writing this...overall you painted a perfect picture of your stance on what is going on and I have to say I agree with yah!
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lol @ mind~souls comment .....


This was cool, I loved what you had to say in this for real.
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Old 05-28-2005, 01:27 PM   #6 (permalink)
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and five days later...

I like how you opened it up. Not really a concrete direction of where this was gonna go, but I like that second line. Makes me think, am I thinking all wrong? And if I just may be, am I the only side that is? We reap what we sow and that goes for anyone.

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