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Old 05-22-2005, 08:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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ChAoS ThEoRy

The nihilist mind
external I find
Madness and chaos,
Evil hard on the grind
in houses
in mine
I witness decline
of morals
like love
Most perpetual lime
thats pressed in the eyes of minds
it renders man blind
to the truths we would find
with piercing eyes like a hawk

yet we're left in the dark
about to embark
on the begining of ends
to be lost in our fears
predisposed to our end

Chaos Theory----
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Old 05-22-2005, 09:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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"I witness decline
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like love"



Thiswas cool ...
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Old 05-23-2005, 07:33 PM   #3 (permalink)
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how can you be undecided of your sex?

Anyway though, to your poem (sorry about that) you damn skippy its a chaos theory. But if you try to break it down you sort of gain a better understanding than just wanting to settle being mind wretched about it. In everyday life I mean, for anything.

thats pressed in the eyes of minds
it renders man blind

kinda like ****** see ****** do, everybody jump on the bandwagon. But unacknowledging that fact. Not even that-to say really. Its just some don't realize the ways they have power to change and become one of their own. Eh-good poem nonetheless man.

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a fine lament on our downward moral spiral
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no doubt one of the toughest things is to see someone you really care about embracing moral fabrication,
the type of love today feels so hollow and is just really lust...
good to see someone focused on true emotions and restoring it around him...

this was dope...
the simplistic wordplay really kept me on focus
as it was very fluid to follow...
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Nicely written piece. Wished it was longer though. You always seem to cut off your poems as soon as it starts to pick up. Uppin for you

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HOLY SHIT! dude, that is soo sick... DAng! I need to read this again. HAHA! This was awesome.
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this was awesome... great write.

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