whats up yall...i havent been writing lately,another drought,so i just got to relax and let it pass by,this is somethin i wrote like a couple weeks ago just cuz i havent posted in the realm for such a long time...
its for the poet tree section,
also not to be a burden but i would really appreciate if at least a few people would go check it out.,we could really use some new members lookin to write competitively...
i would really appreciate it if at least yall could give it a couple weeks,just to see how it goes...if you still dont like it,then i understand...
but we just lost the most active mod in there so we could really use some dedicated poets to help to piece it back together,
anyways this was somethin i wrote for it a couple weeks back...
its long but hope yall check it out,
holla
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"the shores reflection"
the shores reflection,symbolyzes mankinds struggle for peace...
juggling grief,complex emotional suffering...
stumbling,wholeheartedly
tryin to erase all our dirty footprints...
those footprints so consumed with sin,
we may be doomed just to rebegin...
mother nature's rebellion....
poverty's rage...
a lonely man's emptiness...
the oppressed's long crusade
stumbling....
staggering....
breathing in
humble emotions,
from the poor mans raw components
of a mind so explosive...
a mind so fresh,
the visionary
pushed back, repeatedly
due to fear,
of decoding the horror
that the insincere places upon us
ruthlessly
shadows
symbolyzing the eye of the storm...
reformed...
all the pain we've absorbed,
its made us stronger
i keep tellin myself
god shouldnt make us wait to longer
sobering rain showers...
somber
soverign
the casted shadows of rejection
of them nit picking of our imperfections
my mind sharper than erections...
in the dark recollection....
of denied access
to happiness
defining sadness...
the shore's reflection,
gathering strength
tidal waves
tsunami's
undertoes
it reminds me of my sucked in depression...
so shut in my underworld
no one could offer direction
except a humble girl
except this troubled world
cant accept peace
deep inside the mark of the beast
if you return,you'd be lucky to be in one piece...
so my mind cant be in peace
except when
witnessing
the shore's reflection
repressed rage
symbolyzing my mind state for days
and it gets darker with age...
a soul martyr
alone on his crusade,
marking his territory...
with a dark look upon his face
daring others to cross it....
moving with caution...
like the shore's reflection
thinkin twice before goin all the way...
stuck inside this maze...
drowning
hopelessly
in decomposed emotion...
flowin thru my viens
its like the thunder
reigning down
marking its territory
inside the hollow sky
opening the wounds for triple darkness....
the shore's reflection
bombarded
by empty beer bottles
sending messages
to never be returned
cuz no one is concerned
of the mind realms last words...
yearning
turning....
constantly
reaching out
only to come closer every time
only to be denied...
a soul's guilt trip
feeling i got so much to hide
but at the same time,so much to share
the shore's reflection...
what could be better,for symbolzing
broken hearted men's struggle for peace?
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