A butterfly dreaming he's a man

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Old 05-08-2005, 05:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A butterfly dreaming he's a man

A ghost in narrow hallways
A shadow on the lawn
I've listened to you speaking
Without notice I am gone
You speak of life and you speak of God
Without a clue, as if you knew
I could tell you a thing or two
But you don't want to hear it
All you want to find out
Is that you already knew it all

Paul once spoke
Of finding the Christos in you
That is what I'm telling you to do
The truth is like a handful of sand
The tighter you cling,
Or the more you wish to own it,
The easier it is to slip away
It is playful to approach
That which is logically unknowable
That is the way it works

Save the preachy preachy
All you know about morality
You have not yet begun to understand
But it's slipping through your hand
God exists,
But not to terrorize us with lists
Of do's and dont's
What is right has always been clear

Thou shall not harm another
In word or in deed
Let not your mind be the soil
Of hatred, envy, or greed
Before you can judge another
You must first judge yourself
Jeshua spent forty days in the wilderness
To triumph over desire
Siddhartha Gautama sat for forty
Beneath a Bo tree, to understand
Human suffering

Understanding isn't easy
It doesn't happen overnight
Earn a degree in divinity
Or catch me
The honeybee of eternity
Like a shadow in your classrooms
Quietly buzzing
Churning contemplation
Praying without ceasing
In a song
Without notice I am gone
Did you ever stop to wonder?
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Old 05-08-2005, 06:19 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Paul once spoke
Of finding the Christos in you
That is what I'm telling you to do
The truth is like a handful of sand
The tighter you cling,
Or the more you wish to own it,
The easier it is to slip away
It is playful to approach
That which is logically unknowable

rep check Luther

mos def was feeling this stanza the most
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Old 05-08-2005, 07:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I know we ain't sleeping on hurr....Yo this is dope...Probably cause I thought you was calling me out and you don't know me...But then again damn you do....LOL...UPPIN dawg this is hot....
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Old 05-08-2005, 11:23 AM   #4 (permalink)
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basically I enjoyed this piece a lot...
cool mood..title sucked me in...(theres a lot to be said for a title!)
Nice feel..cool concept..liked the read..
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Old 05-08-2005, 04:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Save the preachy preachy
All you know about morality
You have not yet begun to understand
But it's slipping through your hand
God exists,
But not to terrorize us with lists
Of do's and dont's
What is right has always been clear

This was powerful, very nice structure, good choice of words. This is something I can relate to definitely. Keep writing man, I'll keep reading. Pz
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Old 05-08-2005, 05:56 PM   #6 (permalink)
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oh wow this was nice Luther....once again you impress me with your style of poetry and grasp on spiritual matters....this was very inspiring....and was painted perfectly with interesting word-play and concepts.....

The honeybee of eternity
Like a shadow in your classrooms
Quietly buzzing
Churning contemplation
Praying without ceasing
In a song
Without notice I am gone
Did you ever stop to wonder?

^I love the whole poem but that last stanza just went over the top for me....just amazing....I love how you ended on a question...I do that alot.....you hit on alot of big issues in a humble gentle way....really respect that about you man....never close minded

just great poem thanks for sharing

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Old 05-09-2005, 05:05 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Seem like you was calling out a few people with this piece man. The opening and the ending stanzas were my favorite. You made a lot of good points with this piece.

"I've listened to you speaking
Without notice I am gone
You speak of life and you speak of God
Without a clue, as if you knew
I could tell you a thing or two
But you don't want to hear it
All you want to find out
Is that you already knew it all"

^I feel that right there. I got a lot of people like that around my way. You speak different of what they believe in and they feel as if you're attacking them somehow. World is crazy.

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