Reminiscing

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Old 05-07-2005, 11:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Reminiscing

We talked today of times long past,
And how our childhood failed to last.
A time we thought would never end
When all of us were always friends.

We talked of those who came and went
And how those precious years were spent:
Of growing up and drifting apart
And friends we loved with all our hearts.

And when we entered middle school,
Trying hard to be so cool,
And of our favorite eighth grade class
Laughing to make the hour pass.

But if I could have that hour again,
With guys doing push ups counting to ten,
Of answers regarding “swords and stuff,”
Those good times didn’t last quite long enough.

Entering high school – at the bottom again:
Children becoming women and men.
Important decisions then to be made,
Making memories which slowly will fade.

We’re almost through, our time’s almost gone
For we will soon leave, we won’t stay for long
Together we stand before we go on
It’s time to go in, they’re playing our song…


Wrote this during school one day, they put it in the program at our mother/daughter thing last month. I'm so ready to graduate!
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Old 05-08-2005, 02:54 AM   #2 (permalink)
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"And when we entered middle school,
Trying hard to be so cool,
And of our favorite eighth grade class
Laughing to make the hour pass."


^^ I remember those days! lol....Except I didnt have to try hard to be cool, I just was. Nah, LOL ...I'm playin....Stay up
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Old 05-08-2005, 10:54 AM   #3 (permalink)
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yo this poem was cool....I could relate....the good times do fly....and its funny how fast we grow up before we even know it

We’re almost through, our time’s almost gone
For we will soon leave, we won’t stay for long
Together we stand before we go on
It’s time to go in, they’re playing our song…

^my favorite part.....opens the door for future.....deep stuff....interesting poem....and so close to graduration it hits close to home

thanks for sharing

PEACE AND GODBLESS

also thanks for spreading the love and replying to others keep it up
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the rhyming was basic but that wasn't the main focus...
good emotion and nice flow...quality read...
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And when we entered middle school,
Trying hard to be so cool,
And of our favorite eighth grade class
Laughing to make the hour pass.

^ damn this makes me think about my two favorite classes in 8th grade right now (im just about to enter highschool) and just makes me never want to leave it even more. great read and that stanza was my favorite part.
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Old 05-08-2005, 01:49 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Yeah, this definitly hit close to home with graduation right around the corner, the structural aspects of this could be improved on, but thats just because its a very simple poem, emotion is there, and the transitions were smooth, good flow. I thought that even though this was such a basic poem, it didn't matter because of how personal it is (at least to me) good story to tell... Good luck in the future.. I'm ready to graduate too.. Definitly..

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Thanks for your posts. I know I write really simple, but I'm usually trying to convey a message of some kind, and that comes through best when you're not distracted by the structure. Ready to enter in a new stage of life....
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dang, congrats yall seniors! I have one more year but I'm saying the same thing as yall just about. Every year they always say that-I'm ready to go! and we see them at school the week after they graduated. A lot of my friends are graduating next week and I can't stand thinking about it, just mixed. But then again I can't wait to be a senior man.

This poem is like something to be read during graduation ceremonies. Not really a speech, but it could be broken down into one. Sort of a way to open the doors towards the next step of life-the very beginning, but on a good note. A positive change.

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But anyway, this poem brought back great memories of when I was in school. Just thinking back on it makes me want to shed a damn tear lol. We've come a long way. It aint gonna be too long when you're gonna start wishing you was back in school once your out. Just watch

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