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Old 05-07-2005, 10:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Off the top of my brain
The words travel through the maze
Of my mind
Continuing to make it all connect
Set it up to
Become a piece
That will travel through history
Off the top of my brain
These words travel
Through the sound waves
And through the ears to
Ya membrane
Creatin a message
Never ever heard of
Off the top of my brain
I type this all out
Its only 8:35
How much more can I go?
These written works
That let out
My inner workings
Take me on a verbal journey
That only others
Who knows this process
Can understand
Writin to release it all
Let it all seep
On to the threads of paper
Through the holes of a pen tip
To stain the sheets permanently
Only 2 min. past
Off the top of my brain
This is all goin to incredibly insane
Cant stop the fact
That this is so easy
All these words
That create one meaning
A meaning only others can understand
Others who have the experience
Who have seen the words
Flow from the mind’s quill
Down to the nerves
That work your hands
That will grab a writing tool
And that parchment
To create the symbols
Of a language mixed
Of different tongues
To create the gist
Of this poem
That has been written
Off the top of my brain
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Old 05-07-2005, 10:51 PM   #2 (permalink)
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ehhh. only two threads per page. You want to keep writing, show some love to the other poets, or save the poem for when you only have one thread on the main page. There is a lot of traffic within out community and its only cool if you respect the people driving around with you.

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Old 05-07-2005, 10:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yeah i thought i had already posted 3 more though, wierd i guess i might've slipped and i was told it was 2 poems a day and 3 posts per poem. oh well i'll just post more feed and opinions on others until my other one is done.
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Old 05-07-2005, 11:13 PM   #4 (permalink)
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only 2 poems at a time

sorry I'm gonna have to close this
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