.Over-Easy.

Birks · 05-07-2005, 08:30 PM

I sent you flowers
Through a glass door
Which Light shined
And kissed off of
Like a raquetball
...Of Truth...

Kitchen stance was friendly
A karate readiness about
My cooking style,
Waiting to turn those eggs
Into the perfection of
..Beauty Personified..

You lay spread upon
The bed sheet shining
Radiance of powerful
Flirting with my desire
To fry you into,
A nice little batch
Of over-easy eggs
-meaning my wait is over
And the time is now
Devour all into my abyss
Of body parts along the wall....

UFO the Phoenix · 05-07-2005, 10:12 PM

^what the!?!....lol

this poem was slick with it.....over easy....hahaha.....mad creative....I got hungry after reading this....but thats how the passion of love works.....interesting poem

nice and short in and out.....fun read

keep up the good work

STAY UP

PS:

DONT BE A FREELOADER GO AND PAY IT FORWARD (SPREAD THE LOVE)

Birks · 05-08-2005, 06:45 AM

lol I been replying to pieces to and fro man...lol

UFO the Phoenix · 05-08-2005, 10:45 AM

^true....sorry to nag ya

thanks for replying to others

keep it up

Mind~$oul · 05-09-2005, 04:42 PM

So you be making these women breakfast in bed huh? You slippin man, they should be the one making you breakfast. Put your foot down sometime!

But this was a cool poem. Dont think i've seen one like this posted here in the realm lol. Short, simple, and straight to the point. Uppin for you

One luv

05-07-2005, 08:30 PM	#1 (permalink)
Birks Led Zepp Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Northern land Posts: 38	.Over-Easy. I sent you flowers Through a glass door Which Light shined And kissed off of Like a raquetball ...Of Truth... Kitchen stance was friendly A karate readiness about My cooking style, Waiting to turn those eggs Into the perfection of ..Beauty Personified.. You lay spread upon The bed sheet shining Radiance of powerful Flirting with my desire To fry you into, A nice little batch Of over-easy eggs -meaning my wait is over And the time is now Devour all into my abyss Of body parts along the wall....

05-07-2005, 10:12 PM	#2 (permalink)
UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS! Join Date: Aug 1999 Location: Oceanside CA USA Posts: 2,965	^what the!?!....lol this poem was slick with it.....over easy....hahaha.....mad creative....I got hungry after reading this....but thats how the passion of love works.....interesting poem nice and short in and out.....fun read keep up the good work STAY UP PS: DONT BE A FREELOADER GO AND PAY IT FORWARD (SPREAD THE LOVE) __________________ *The Truth isn't out there because its already landed and the Truth is:* JESUS CHRIST Oddie Sloan

05-08-2005, 10:45 AM	#4 (permalink)
UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS! Join Date: Aug 1999 Location: Oceanside CA USA Posts: 2,965	^true....sorry to nag ya thanks for replying to others keep it up __________________ *The Truth isn't out there because its already landed and the Truth is:* JESUS CHRIST Oddie Sloan

05-09-2005, 04:42 PM	#5 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,145	So you be making these women breakfast in bed huh? You slippin man, they should be the one making you breakfast. Put your foot down sometime! But this was a cool poem. Dont think i've seen one like this posted here in the realm lol. Short, simple, and straight to the point. Uppin for you One luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

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05-08-2005, 06:45 AM	#3 (permalink)
Birks Led Zepp Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Northern land Posts: 38	lol I been replying to pieces to and fro man...lol

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