YoU aNd I

[UniqPitty]

what is it about you that makes me feel this way.....
when we you touch me, my body trembles....
and my mind goes blank....
to me you could me the ultimate sin.......
from the physical to the mental....
it seems like you are around me....
nothing else matters, i am you and you are me....
i never thought a love like this would grow........
into something most would call.....
true love.....
we have had our ups and downs...
ins and outs, highs and lows....
and we are still here, strong together....
you are my world and the space within....
and for that i love you....
we had a major change in our lives...
where you were my worst enemy.....
i could bare to see your face.....
i felt your space getting smaller in my world...
but even after the storm and the rain....
we have survive and although.........
you may think i would get back at cha........
my love for you is way to strong........
you say you love me, and want me to be your WIFE...
so now im not worried of what our days may bring....
i can only pray that God will see us through....
and if it is meant for us to be, we will be....
and if not, my love for you will never die...
so on that note......
here is to the one and only......
Prymetime Wesby!!!

[Bhitiah]

"i never thought a love like this would grow........
into something most would call.....
true love....." I was just curious, you said, most would call it true love....so....what would you call it? unless your part of the most group

[Bhitiah]

I dont know why the board's being so damn quiet lately. I'll up this for you ....

[Mind~$oul]

This was a very sweet poem. It made me blush. Nothing much I really have to say lol.

One luv

[absolute zero]

I saw a bunch of like, little piddly no big deal type mistakes. But other than this, it was just what M~S said " a sweet poem" Very nice. Sorry you aint gettin many hits on your piece. Stay up

God Bless