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Old 04-28-2005, 02:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My Future

My future is uncertain
Tomorrow is unknown
What will I be doing in five years?
Shit, will I even be alive in five years?
Only God knows and I honestly feel that God chose to put me here
For a specific purpose which hasn稚 been made that clear
So while I知 here, I知 gonna push fear to the back of the line
And allow positive thoughts to exit and free my mind
I just wanna speak my mind
Cuz see, I知 not exactly sure where I知 headed in life
I知 just makin sure that my head is on right
And I know that if I fight for my life and strive to do right
That I値l be alright , I値l be just fine
I値l be able to take care of those wonderful parents of mine
And I値l have a beautiful wife whose smile is so bright when she smiles day turns to night as the sun hides in fright of being out shined....
A beautiful wife whose eyes cause my eyes to cry just because I知 so happy that she is in my life
I値l cry when she gives birth to our child and I値l smile and be the happiest man in the world
I値l be the happiest dad in the world and provide for my children
Food, clothes, shelter, knowledge, guidance, wisdom
Love, support, encouragement, acknowledgment,
Tenderness, friendship, happiness, and everything else
If ever they need help, I値l be there and I swear to always be around
Man my family just might drown from all the love I知 gonna show
I just hope that all this will someday be
Life痴 uncertainty is certainly never gonna leave
Pray for me, that I may reach my life expectancy
And that the world may get to see all that I have to offer...
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Old 04-28-2005, 09:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
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This is good...one of those sorting our your feelings pieces

And I値l have a beautiful wife whose smile is so bright when she smiles day turns to night as the sun hides in fright of being out shined....

^^That was a nice line...very good use of imagery..although I know that this wasn't about having great imagery..all the same though...I liked that.
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Old 04-28-2005, 09:48 AM   #3 (permalink)
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i agree with that...

You could tell you were kinda just...flowing to what exactly you were thinking...what you were trying to say was clear...and you did a pretty nice job of conveying those thoughts to the pad...stay writing
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Old 04-30-2005, 02:20 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Skinna marinki Dinky Doo... lol....I dont know WHY this reminded me of that. Good work man...
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