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Old 04-27-2005, 01:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Is it weird,
to have a million feelings,
dwelling deep inside,
tearing at my heart?
Is it weird,
to feel as if your lost,
with no place to call your home,
and nowhere left to go?
Is it weird,
to live each day,
as if everything is fine,
but then go home and cry?
Is it weird,
that each day i feel a million things,
that even i can't explain,
and it's messing with my head?
Is it weird,
that someday soon,
i'll have all the answers,
or non at all to the questions i asked before?
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Old 04-27-2005, 04:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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a mind twister of open ended questions lol different

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Yea, i loved that... I definitely felt this... i felt the ending especially.. that really bugs me out as well... honestly.. true mystery... i really liked the word play... real nice.. kind of short though... but still nice...
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Old 04-27-2005, 08:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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No, it's not weird. It's quite natural and you're not alone with feeling depressed.

I thought the topic of the poem was repetitive but if that's what you're feeling, then nobody can tell you what to feel. It was simplistic but still a good read.
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Old 04-28-2005, 09:58 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanx yall that means alot. I've ben in this depresent phase for quite a while and i decided it was time to post my feelings/ questions to the public.
once again thank you guys.

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Old 04-28-2005, 12:41 PM   #6 (permalink)
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..This was nice - And alot of people feel the same way all the time - Alot of peeps could connect with something like this real easy - Stay up and keep posting -
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Old 04-28-2005, 04:07 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Thnx madnick that means alot.

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