Natures Mood Swings (feat. Absolute Zero)

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Old 04-27-2005, 12:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Natures Mood Swings (feat. Absolute Zero)

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Humans are a disease
Infecting the sky
Which was once blue clean
Now the clouds
Move like kaleidoscope shoestrings
The ground is shivering
The wind is whispering
I’m experiencing Natures Mood Swings


"Melting minutes, we are our maker"

Where flowers refusing blooming
And the bees that labor
Have become grumpy
Autumn has become ugly
And the dead leaves
Which now haunt me
Desire some company………..


"Let the dead die in peaceful madness"

Something is different today
The frogs have stopped their off beat melody
No more doves sing
Even the river is no longer dancing
The water is silent
The trees are quiet
Even the secret private
Weeds have paused their riot
The ants have vanished
The hummingbirds have landed
The spiders have built their webs
On rainbows enclosing the planet


"A broken home, is this how you planned it?"

A chess game.
The sun has defeated the moon,
But only for today.
I wonder if the rematch
Will be filled with mother's spectators.


“The stars secrete in suns shade”

I've heard the blue jay is in town...
(The tweet was sent from cupid)
And they sigh love's theme across the Heavens.
Soaring above hard-nosed coyotes,
Who sniff the dirt, unaware of the spectacle,
Searching for a scent, a kill, a meal.
But after yesterday's nothingness,
The Earth seems a bit...well, tainted.


“Desert oasis behind smoke and mirrors”

Still, the creatures strive to live on,
And today looks....heh...."brighter"
: So welcome to proximity,
Breathe deep into infinity, and
Hear with the ears of DaVinci.
This is the battle of centuries,


“Humans entering natures mood swings”

And if you've brought your ticket, enjoy.
It's the moon and sun, down to earth
Spawned into all of her ploys...
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Old 04-27-2005, 12:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Weeds have paused their riot
The ants have vanished
The hummingbirds have landed
The spiders have built their webs
On rainbows enclosing the planet

i don't usually even bother to read collaborative poetic efforts... but this was good.

one missing vibe was the kaliedoscope shoestrings... ?

absolute zero was fantastic.

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i love the chess part mang...ha hah that was tight...actually ..all of em were very tight!!..haha

good job...!!
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ahh this was nice... not usually a fan of 'nature-ish' poems... but this was so much more than that. the interaction of of man and the earth, the inter-connectedness of the two.. presented in simple, yet beautifully scripted language.

"The spiders have built their webs
On rainbows enclosing the planet"
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"A broken home, is this how you planned it?"


these lines here will echo in my head for a while.

much enjoyed. you played off each other with ease.
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This is a modern poetic short-version of Rachel Carson's silent spring... yes yes yes we must be remindied. Nice to read another one form you again UFO.

I really dont like the last line.. I think it cut the flow of things short... I dont know. The ploy the ploy, am I wrong for being unclear about this?????
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