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celestial7 · 04-27-2005, 01:46 AM

All alone, like the day of my birth
My soul crying for home.....
but the portals been closed.....
until the test has been completed......
and the enemy defeated.

Born pure. In love, from the Son.
I live, in love, with the Son.

Celestial"7"

Mind~$oul · 04-28-2005, 03:56 AM

Couldnt really get into this piece to be honest. I guess because it was too short, I couldnt build on anything. But I seen this at the bottom with know replies, so I'm uppin for you. Maybe somebody will see different in the poem.

One luv

04-27-2005, 01:46 AM	#1 (permalink)
celestial7 The Passion Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Brooklyn in the back alleys Posts: 4	Blind Description All alone, like the day of my birth My soul crying for home..... but the portals been closed..... until the test has been completed...... and the enemy defeated. Born pure. In love, from the Son. I live, in love, with the Son. Celestial"7"

04-28-2005, 03:56 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,145	Couldnt really get into this piece to be honest. I guess because it was too short, I couldnt build on anything. But I seen this at the bottom with know replies, so I'm uppin for you. Maybe somebody will see different in the poem. One luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

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