Wings

rhino42 · 04-13-2005, 10:47 PM

Wings
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Dedicated to Leif Peterson (my cousin/best freind) 10//30//1988- 4//13//1997
R<>I<>P<>

Carried on the wings of love
You were swept away
To that glorious land
Where we'll see you again one day.
With the angels hovering near
You said your last good-bye
You gave up your battle
And soared into the crystal clear sky.

That sweet smile
We will always carry in our hearts
Knowing you were ready
When from our lives you did depart.

Gossamer's wings I imagine
You now call your own
As you sail in the Heavens
And sit in front of the Throne.

No memory could ever endow
The true beauty of your soul
For God gave to us our own Angel
For a brief while to hold.

Erik Bützin

Bhitiah · 04-13-2005, 11:03 PM

That's a great poem for your loved one, good job, probably took alot to write that...

rhino42 · 04-13-2005, 11:21 PM

thanks for yo reply, yea it took some from me, u should see the page i wrote it on

RapTuRePrOoF · 04-13-2005, 11:28 PM

ya, cool poem man. Hes looking down on that right now too. keep it coming man, i luv this style of poetry!

BK-NEON · 04-14-2005, 01:13 AM

yo i really liked that piece...it was very sincere, the emotion was felt...keep doin ya thang

rhino42 · 04-14-2005, 11:20 PM

thanks to yall for ur replies much aprecciated

Mind~$oul · 04-17-2005, 02:53 AM

I really felt this piece man. I think we all have lost somebody very close to us.

But this poem reminds me of this tattoo this dude has. It's a poem dedicated to his mother he lost from breast cancer. The whole poem is tatted on his back. Beautiful.

One luv

04-13-2005, 10:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
rhino42 Ich liebe der Tisch!! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Ozark, Misery Posts: 99	Wings Wings ******* Dedicated to Leif Peterson (my cousin/best freind) 10//30//1988- 4//13//1997 R<>I<>P<> Carried on the wings of love You were swept away To that glorious land Where we'll see you again one day. With the angels hovering near You said your last good-bye You gave up your battle And soared into the crystal clear sky. That sweet smile We will always carry in our hearts Knowing you were ready When from our lives you did depart. Gossamer's wings I imagine You now call your own As you sail in the Heavens And sit in front of the Throne. No memory could ever endow The true beauty of your soul For God gave to us our own Angel For a brief while to hold. Erik Bützin __________________ www.myspace.com/eriklb4263

04-13-2005, 11:03 PM	#2 (permalink)
Bhitiah Powerful Scriptures Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,168	That's a great poem for your loved one, good job, probably took alot to write that... __________________ You can bomb the world to peices, but cant bomb into peace

04-13-2005, 11:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
rhino42 Ich liebe der Tisch!! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Ozark, Misery Posts: 99	thanks for yo reply, yea it took some from me, u should see the page i wrote it on __________________ www.myspace.com/eriklb4263

04-14-2005, 01:13 AM	#5 (permalink)
BK-NEON I'm Me, Bitch!!! Join Date: Jul 1999 Location: Brooklyn, New York Posts: 680	yo i really liked that piece...it was very sincere, the emotion was felt...keep doin ya thang __________________ If there is no struggle, there is no progress

04-14-2005, 11:20 PM	#6 (permalink)
rhino42 Ich liebe der Tisch!! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Ozark, Misery Posts: 99	thanks to yall for ur replies much aprecciated __________________ www.myspace.com/eriklb4263

04-13-2005, 11:28 PM	#4 (permalink)
RapTuRePrOoF Original Talent Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: East L.A. Posts: 28	ya, cool poem man. Hes looking down on that right now too. keep it coming man, i luv this style of poetry!

04-17-2005, 02:53 AM	#7 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,145	I really felt this piece man. I think we all have lost somebody very close to us. But this poem reminds me of this tattoo this dude has. It's a poem dedicated to his mother he lost from breast cancer. The whole poem is tatted on his back. Beautiful. One luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

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