I am there

Luther · 04-13-2005, 06:40 PM

My pen is part of me
Illuminated by a common streetlamp
Glimmering through raindrops
On the windshield, sparkles
I let the pen speak for itself
This is what it revealed
String Theory may be
A theory of everything
Like strings on a violin
Provoked into a particular note
A particular state of being
Is this what my eyes are seeing
Or is this what my eyes
Are willing to see
Existance is a musical masterpiece
Matter is raindrops going
Splish, splash, splatter
Rhythms in tune with the melody
The harmonious world
Is patterned consonnance
Divinely designed
Dissonance bounced off the rhymed
Who is the Composer?
What distance could seperate
The artist from the art
Is the poet the person
Behind the pen?
Or is the poet in the poem
Lending its voice to the pen
Where do Ideas come from?
When does an Idea become
Ideology becomes Dogma
Willing Ignorance?
Is theology limited to dogma?
Where is the distinction between
A burp and a belch?
When can an Idea go on for too long?
God wiggled a toe in the ocean,
A stream of bubbles fluttered
Into a rising existance
And this is how the multi-verse
Came into being
I jest but I'd bet
That a footstomp to a flea
Sounds a lot like
A Bigbang
At least for a moment in time
Welcome to the mental plane
Far beyond the Akashic
Who?What?Why?When?How?
Holy Cow! At least for the Hindus!
Dare to dream
Transform--Believe, To be
Discover who you were before time began
Be Free
Smile innocently
Remember the love that you are
Open your heart to the music
Playing
Always Playing
Strange melodies of change to occur
Strange radiations
Permeate the home
Transcendent melodies
Pour forth through the vents
Behind a locked door, alone
I am there

Bhitiah · 04-13-2005, 06:59 PM

Transform--Believe, To be
Discover who you were before time began
Be Free
Smile innocently
Remember the love that you are
Open your heart to the music
Playing
Always Playing
Strange melodies of change to occur
Strange radiations
Permeate the home
Transcendent melodies
Pour forth through the vents
Behind a locked door, alone
I am there

Damn, I loved the ending.

RapTuRePrOoF · 04-13-2005, 07:47 PM

this was cool. Very original, cuz i havent seen this type of mindset at all. nice shit, keep it coming!

rhino42 · 04-13-2005, 10:26 PM

this was tight, i liked the whole mind set, like raptureproof said,

keep it comin

Luther · 04-14-2005, 02:44 PM

Thank You, this was something I felt inspired to write. It's not necessarily great, but it felt good to write. Thank You

Brit Boi Gee · 04-14-2005, 08:01 PM

Luther, this piece had wonderfully weaving vivid imagery. This was everywhere and nowhwre, it was out in the universe in confined to a single thought. It felt like a soul searching piece, the slight thoughts which go on by us withoutmost times being put to paper. This is the kind of thing, those thoughts, which renew my passion daily. Turning something so seemingly small as an insignificant moment into a new occurence, a new world even. You asked some great questions in this piece I enjoyed it! keep it up, Luther.

04-13-2005, 06:40 PM	#1 (permalink)
Luther Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 249	I am there My pen is part of me Illuminated by a common streetlamp Glimmering through raindrops On the windshield, sparkles I let the pen speak for itself This is what it revealed String Theory may be A theory of everything Like strings on a violin Provoked into a particular note A particular state of being Is this what my eyes are seeing Or is this what my eyes Are willing to see Existance is a musical masterpiece Matter is raindrops going Splish, splash, splatter Rhythms in tune with the melody The harmonious world Is patterned consonnance Divinely designed Dissonance bounced off the rhymed Who is the Composer? What distance could seperate The artist from the art Is the poet the person Behind the pen? Or is the poet in the poem Lending its voice to the pen Where do Ideas come from? When does an Idea become Ideology becomes Dogma Willing Ignorance? Is theology limited to dogma? Where is the distinction between A burp and a belch? When can an Idea go on for too long? God wiggled a toe in the ocean, A stream of bubbles fluttered Into a rising existance And this is how the multi-verse Came into being I jest but I'd bet That a footstomp to a flea Sounds a lot like A Bigbang At least for a moment in time Welcome to the mental plane Far beyond the Akashic Who?What?Why?When?How? Holy Cow! At least for the Hindus! Dare to dream Transform--Believe, To be Discover who you were before time began Be Free Smile innocently Remember the love that you are Open your heart to the music Playing Always Playing Strange melodies of change to occur Strange radiations Permeate the home Transcendent melodies Pour forth through the vents Behind a locked door, alone I am there __________________ Love of mine, someday you will die But I'll be close behind I'll follow you into the dark No blinding light, or tunnels to gates of white Just our hands clasped so tight, waiting for the hint of a spark If heaven and hell decide that they both are satisfied Illuminate the no's on their vacancy signs If there's no one beside you when your soul embarks Then I'll follow you into the dark

04-13-2005, 06:59 PM	#2 (permalink)
Bhitiah Powerful Scriptures Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,168	Transform--Believe, To be Discover who you were before time began Be Free Smile innocently Remember the love that you are Open your heart to the music Playing Always Playing Strange melodies of change to occur Strange radiations Permeate the home Transcendent melodies Pour forth through the vents Behind a locked door, alone I am there Damn, I loved the ending. __________________ You can bomb the world to peices, but cant bomb into peace

04-13-2005, 10:26 PM	#4 (permalink)
rhino42 Ich liebe der Tisch!! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Ozark, Misery Posts: 99	this was tight, i liked the whole mind set, like raptureproof said, keep it comin __________________ www.myspace.com/eriklb4263

04-14-2005, 02:44 PM	#5 (permalink)
Luther Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 249	Thank You, this was something I felt inspired to write. It's not necessarily great, but it felt good to write. Thank You __________________ Love of mine, someday you will die But I'll be close behind I'll follow you into the dark No blinding light, or tunnels to gates of white Just our hands clasped so tight, waiting for the hint of a spark If heaven and hell decide that they both are satisfied Illuminate the no's on their vacancy signs If there's no one beside you when your soul embarks Then I'll follow you into the dark

04-14-2005, 08:01 PM	#6 (permalink)
Brit Boi Gee manifest the zen Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Near To Athena Posts: 15,977	Luther, this piece had wonderfully weaving vivid imagery. This was everywhere and nowhwre, it was out in the universe in confined to a single thought. It felt like a soul searching piece, the slight thoughts which go on by us withoutmost times being put to paper. This is the kind of thing, those thoughts, which renew my passion daily. Turning something so seemingly small as an insignificant moment into a new occurence, a new world even. You asked some great questions in this piece I enjoyed it! keep it up, Luther. __________________ They all laughed when I said I was going to be a comedian. They aren't laughing now. -Bob Monkhouse Brit Boi has a highly calibrated wifermometer

04-13-2005, 07:47 PM	#3 (permalink)
RapTuRePrOoF Original Talent Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: East L.A. Posts: 28	this was cool. Very original, cuz i havent seen this type of mindset at all. nice shit, keep it coming!

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