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[SAMARA]

I am leaving and this is not a surprise, as you had left long before you came home at sunrise. Or perhaps it was the day that I pulled the door closed and walked away, and so like you, I too, have chosen a new day. Perhaps its wrong but half of my life is gone and it is not with regret, and I cant say it didn’t happen or there was someone I wish I met. I have been trying for some time to place thoughts into words, to say that I knew what my life would be at this particular time without sounding absurd. But I can’t, and there has not been an instant that I could have changed life for me. If I did I would have lost my way, or rather not chosen a new day. I miss you though and my heart pines. I reached to sky to grasp at the unseen, unclasping as I gaze at the birds recalling what had been. For me there is indifference, cheating life or cheating death. A soul’s mate or the truest of love, they both are blessed. Perhaps, I am a fool to surrender parting words and tell the sweetest secrets and how they will unfold. It was from my lips, from my hips, from my heart and from my soul were these words taken and given nothing in return. I have been taken to the lowest realms of life with feelings of hate and shame. I have experienced life and death too intimately leaving remnants of pain. All in all it doesn’t matter, it was my choice to leave and to stand on my own. My way, some way, I will reap what is sown.

[Halloween Jack]

Originally Posted by SAMARA

I am leaving and this is not a surprise, as you had left long before you came home at sunrise. Or perhaps it was the day that I pulled the door closed and walked away, and so like you, I too, have chosen a new day. Perhaps its wrong but half of my life is gone and it is not with regret, and I cant say it didn’t happen or there was someone I wish I met. I have been trying for some time to place thoughts into words, to say that I knew what my life would be at this particular time without sounding absurd. But I can’t, and there has not been an instant that I could have changed life for me. If I did I would have lost my way, or rather not chosen a new day. I miss you though and my heart pines. I reached to sky to grasp at the unseen, unclasping as I gaze at the birds recalling what had been. For me there is indifference, cheating life or cheating death. A soul’s mate or the truest of love, they both are blessed. Perhaps, I am a fool to surrender parting words and tell the sweetest secrets and how they will unfold. It was from my lips, from my hips, from my heart and from my soul were these words taken and given nothing in return. I have been taken to the lowest realms of life with feelings of hate and shame. I have experienced life and death too intimately leaving remnants of pain. All in all it doesn’t matter, it was my choice to leave and to stand on my own. My way, some way, I will reap what is sown.

wow. this poem hurts to read miss. you've DEFINITELY touched a soft spot with this piece. i know these feelings all to well... all too well...
wow. this is great miss. i hope you never have to feel like this again. but life's hell lady. keep writing, you know who'll be listening... keep your chin up ma. 1.
i dont exist anymore.....

[shadygrady]

damn... this was very well said

rep points mos def

good job samara

[RapTuRePrOoF]

yo this poem was cool. Different structure, but good.

8/10

[rhino42]

this wqas sad samara but still a good write, much love

stay up

[Czarina WiseDome]

Dope...

'For me there is indifference, cheating life or cheating death. A soul’s mate or the truest of love, they both are blessed. Perhaps, I am a fool to surrender parting words and tell the sweetest secrets and how they will unfold. It was from my lips, from my hips, from my heart and from my soul were these words taken and given nothing in return. ' - Felt truthfully!

[Mind~$oul]

"For me there is indifference, cheating life or cheating death. A soul’s mate or the truest of love, they both are blessed. Perhaps, I am a fool to surrender parting words and tell the sweetest secrets and how they will unfold. It was from my lips, from my hips, from my heart and from my soul were these words taken and given nothing in return"

^I really liked them lines there. Very heartfelt. This was mos def different from the work i'm use to seeing from you. Seem more like a letter than anything. Atleast it did from the way you structured it. Keep it up

One luv

[RealMS]

I have been taken to the lowest realms of life with feelings of hate and shame. I have experienced life and death too intimately leaving remnants of pain.
dang girl, I know that. "to the lowest realms of life" explains the emotion well enough to take the reader in. Felt.

All in all it doesn’t matter, it was my choice to leave and to stand on my own. My way, some way, I will reap what is sown.
I like this as well, dang this makes me wanna cry! I wrote something last night called Nothing Matters-but anyway this is crazy, I'm listening to Az Yet's song, "Hard to Say I'm Sorry" it fits with this piece in a way.

-Much Love

[blackmouth88]

bringing up old feelings

dats all i can say immma leave dis one alone its soo deep (wow)

stay true