it's been a minute since i've used this alias! lol

shadygrady · 04-12-2005, 06:32 AM

Everytime I see you and have every intent of speaking to you, I seem to lose focus of my vision
Composure never failed me before
It's not you... it's me

Lack of self confidence is my disease

constantly thinking that I'm inferior in the eyes of others

feelings such as I am the mat on the porch that you so openly wipe your feet upon

I don't really know how to rid myself of these thoughts

Yet another reason I have put my trust and faith in the Lord Jesus Christ

absolute zero · 04-12-2005, 11:17 AM

hallelujah man. Glad you found him

God Bless

RealMS · 04-14-2005, 06:38 PM

you know whats weird? The other day in 4th block I wrote a poem so similar to this. Usually I can't get into it but it actually turned out nice. Only thing is my ending is different from yours. Anyhoo-I wasn't really expecting that ending either. So the entire time you were talking to/about Jesus. This is nice.

feelings such as I am the mat on the porch that you so openly wipe your feet upon
I know you heard this before; everything happens for a reason. Time for it to sink in!

-Much Love

AlmostFamous · 04-15-2005, 08:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RealMS

you know whats weird? The other day in 4th block I wrote a poem so similar to this. Usually I can't get into it but it actually turned out nice. Only thing is my ending is different from yours. Anyhoo-I wasn't really expecting that ending either. So the entire time you were talking to/about Jesus. This is nice.

feelings such as I am the mat on the porch that you so openly wipe your feet upon
I know you heard this before; everything happens for a reason. Time for it to sink in!

-Much Love

thanks girly

Czarina WiseDome · 04-17-2005, 12:37 PM

Short... I would've like more.. I think the depth was evident in such shortness.. didnt seem like a poem.. more like a chant being said to non-believers.. however it was different.. I liked... peace!

04-12-2005, 06:32 AM	#1 (permalink)
shadygrady nate short's the name Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Sioux FIZZY... aka sioux falls south dakota... hey someone's got to represent the MidWest Posts: 521	it's been a minute since i've used this alias! lol Everytime I see you and have every intent of speaking to you, I seem to lose focus of my vision Composure never failed me before It's not you... it's me Lack of self confidence is my disease constantly thinking that I'm inferior in the eyes of others feelings such as I am the mat on the porch that you so openly wipe your feet upon I don't really know how to rid myself of these thoughts Yet another reason I have put my trust and faith in the Lord Jesus Christ __________________ life is too damn short yo get out and get your's I love my family

04-17-2005, 12:37 PM	#5 (permalink)
Czarina WiseDome Dikin' since 83... Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Chi - could - Go .. Iller Noize Posts: 4,506	Short... I would've like more.. I think the depth was evident in such shortness.. didnt seem like a poem.. more like a chant being said to non-believers.. however it was different.. I liked... peace! __________________ i ain't neve been no fool .. i just put off graduatin' for a pair of tennis shoes - T. I. Still Gifted...

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04-14-2005, 06:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
RealMS Pro 31 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lafayette/New Orleans, LA Posts: 4,230	you know whats weird? The other day in 4th block I wrote a poem so similar to this. Usually I can't get into it but it actually turned out nice. Only thing is my ending is different from yours. Anyhoo-I wasn't really expecting that ending either. So the entire time you were talking to/about Jesus. This is nice. feelings such as I am the mat on the porch that you so openly wipe your feet upon I know you heard this before; everything happens for a reason. Time for it to sink in! -Much Love

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