"Imaginative Mind State Pt 1"

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Old 04-12-2005, 12:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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"Imaginative Mind State Pt 1"
When I'm in an imaginative mind-state my mind-takes me to places I've never seen
And to places that don't exist, not even in my dreams
I seem to travel, engagin in space-explorations with great-expectations
Of amazing galaxies but I'm sadly mistaken
My mind creates a fallacy well actually I'm actively engagin with the residents of cloud-nine
Eternal bliss as I spit profound-rhymes
I've found-time, around-nine
Minutes just sittin not doin shit
So I move to it, started usin it
By this time it's only eight
More than enough time for me to create great rhymes and climb
To my minds highest peak, so high that i fly
"I might die this week"
Turbulence as murderous thoughts impede my flight path
I fight past defense, eradicating obstacles
Nothing's impossible, anything can happen....
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Old 04-13-2005, 06:38 PM   #2 (permalink)
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this shits ill dog. cats be sleeping.
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"More than enough time for me to create great rhymes and climb
To my minds highest peak, so high that i fly
"I might die this week"
Turbulence as murderous thoughts impede my flight path
I fight past defense, eradicating obstacles
Nothing's impossible, anything can happen...."

This is good, I wanna see more from you
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Old 04-16-2005, 02:38 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Dope... I just wished it was longer...

' seem to travel, engagin in space-explorations with great-expectations
Of amazing galaxies but I'm sadly mistaken' - Nice!
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Old 04-19-2005, 05:39 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Piece was up and down for me. I had trouble getting into it to be honest. Shouldnt be getting slept on though. Uppin for you

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Old 04-19-2005, 06:49 PM   #6 (permalink)
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^I see what you mean by it being all over the place, but geez that's how I feel sometimes. Ever try writing when in that zone? Almost impossible for me. That kinda stuff I do not show here lol.

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I seem to travel, engagin in space-explorations with great-expectations
Of amazing galaxies but I'm sadly mistaken
I can relate to this the most. Not so much other's high expectations of me, but my own. I expect so much out of me til I feel like I gotta be superwoman or something on that level. The second line I have in bold, is like a certain limit you have in life-though I don't like to think of things like that, there is a point where being realistic comes into play. Some ppl. like to fulfill ALL their dreams, well I'm just one of those ppl. But I guess I'm on both sides of the fence. Depends where I'm at, if that makes sense. Your last line clarifies what I just said.

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dis wuz good a lil short but sweet, u got skills cant wait 4 more


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Old 04-19-2005, 09:48 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I Personally think it was to plain........not plain, generic.......it had no personal touch to it, i mean granted it was it was fairly image-full(for its length) but you supposed to say things that make me think your mind is on cloud nine, not tell me its there, you know? iono, it was alright i do want to see a longer peice from you though

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