Life Elevator

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Old 04-11-2005, 11:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Life Elevator

Life Elevator

*repost for all the new heads, poem is classic after going over it*

Life is too beautiful
To spend it in a cubicle all alone
Now may be more suitable then later
To tell your neighbor that God’s elevator
Is taking his people to the 7th floor
You going up or down?

I look around the hospital room
The beeping machine interrupts my sleep
Was this a lucid dream or some exclusive scheme
I couldn’t tell I couldn’t smell I couldn’t yell
I just lay there petrified like a ghost in a shell
And then I felt a sudden burst as my spirit fell upward
Feeling my flesh drifting away from me
Enjoyable discomfort
My soul somehow escapes my damaged drained body
And I found myself in some type of astral plane lobby
Surrounded by bright white lights that could put the moon on strike
And make the stars jealous
This luminosity is beyond color description
I follow the radiant strangers who lead me to an illuminating elevator
The grim reaper waits inside giving me a faceless smile
Before I could speak I hear a murmur whisper
You going up or down?
His skinless fingers pointing to the gleaming buttons
Everything seem to move in quick slow motion
Where were the angels and demons everyone spoke of?
I read the numbers starting at 7 on the top
And dropping down to negative 666
I look up think of heaven and erupt above the clouds
All my concerns were gone with the wind as well as my sins
Did I mention how much I love the sound that leads me forward?
No boring harps it was more like words from doves
The voices recorded by all singing in amalgamation
Some type of welcoming song
I followed the “gold brick road” to see the “Wisdom of God”
And the sights that I saw were so unexpected I stood there and pause
As I literally watched all my flaws wash off
From the reflection of a perfect circle rainbow
In the middle sat the most beautiful insane glow
I couldn’t make out the face nor dare to look into the powerful eyes burning
I found myself Looking down at my invisible feet screaming I’m not worthy
And then he spoke to me putting my fears too ease
Said be at peace and feel my presence
Welcome home my dear child this is heaven………..
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Old 04-12-2005, 11:19 AM   #2 (permalink)
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hey i remember this one. Good stuff, man.

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Old 04-12-2005, 12:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Life Elevator



Life is too beautiful
To spend it in a cubicle all alone
Now may be more suitable then later
To tell your neighbor that God’s elevator
Is taking his people to the 7th floor
You going up or down?

I look around the hospital room
The beeping machine interrupts my sleep
Was this a lucid dream or some exclusive scheme
I couldn’t tell I couldn’t smell I couldn’t yell
I just lay there petrified like a ghost in a shell
And then I felt a sudden burst as my spirit fell upward
Feeling my flesh drifting away from me
Enjoyable discomfort
My soul somehow escapes my damaged drained body
And I found myself in some type of astral plane lobby
Surrounded by bright white lights that could put the moon on strike
And make the stars jealous
This luminosity is beyond color description
I follow the radiant strangers who lead me to an illuminating elevator
The grim reaper waits inside giving me a faceless smile
Before I could speak I hear a murmur whisper
You going up or down?
His skinless fingers pointing to the gleaming buttons
Everything seem to move in quick slow motion
Where were the angels and demons everyone spoke of?
I read the numbers starting at 7 on the top
And dropping down to negative 666
I look up think of heaven and erupt above the clouds
All my concerns were gone with the wind as well as my sins
Did I mention how much I love the sound that leads me forward?
No boring harps it was more like words from doves
The voices recorded by all singing in amalgamation
Some type of welcoming song
I followed the “gold brick road” to see the “Wisdom of God”
And the sights that I saw were so unexpected I stood there and pause
As I literally watched all my flaws wash off
From the reflection of a perfect circle rainbow
In the middle sat the most beautiful insane glow
I couldn’t make out the face nor dare to look into the powerful eyes burning
I found myself Looking down at my invisible feet screaming I’m not worthy
And then he spoke to me putting my fears too ease
Said be at peace and feel my presence
Welcome home my dear child this is heaven………..
I'm quoting this whole piece because it was so nice. I feel that there is a lot of emotion in this piece but I feel that the message is the best quality in this UFO. Alot of knowledge went into this and it was just real dope.
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Old 04-12-2005, 12:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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simply outstanding. but honestly, if i were in that elevator, i dont think i'd have a choice which direction i'd be going in...
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'I look around the hospital room
The beeping machine interrupts my sleep
Was this a lucid dream or some exclusive scheme
I couldn’t tell I couldn’t smell I couldn’t yell
I just lay there petrified like a ghost in a shell
And then I felt a sudden burst as my spirit fell upward
Feeling my flesh drifting away from me
Enjoyable discomfort' - .. this is why I love you!

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