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Old 04-11-2005, 08:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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death
no more
so much pain
tears fell to the sky
devil catch me if u can
i've fallen from jesus hands
life is such a struggle i
whipe my eyes and touch the ledge
from the courtyard up the stairs
i came from clasped hands and
muffuled prayers i
couldnt belive it
what had i become?
first lier then theif
from theif came assasin
blood
wound
victim
open coat
hand gun......
life


....dont feel bad if u didnt get it...this was a key i did about a man jumping off a building it started with death and ended with life..

wanted to link the pic but couldnt find it...
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Old 04-11-2005, 09:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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dude.........you said victom, you mean victim right?

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Old 04-11-2005, 11:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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not bad.....nice for a lil keystyle....different coming from you

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Old 04-12-2005, 12:28 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I've replied to this three times now. Well, This is the third time, and it's getting on my nerves when I click post quick reply and my computer says, bad request, well fuck you and yur bad request...but anyway...i enjoyed this, it is different coming from you i guess...huh, well, collabo? topic? no love.
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Old 04-12-2005, 12:43 AM   #5 (permalink)
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^^lol at bhitaih's reply

this was mos def different coming from you... but i like it

favorite part

tears fell to the sky
devil catch me if u can

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Old 04-12-2005, 11:18 AM   #6 (permalink)
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word, this was different but increidble for being keyed up.......i couldn't have done somethin that good just keystylin.......keep it up

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Old 04-13-2005, 01:17 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I aint been here in a long while and this definately feels different coming from you. It was nice though... though I will admit I had to read it a couple times to get it.
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Old 04-15-2005, 09:42 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 04-17-2005, 07:37 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Was the structure intended? I kept looking at that, starting counting the syllables for a minute but I quit lol. life is such a struggle <--I can only imagine the person saying that with tiredness; fed up, with life. IDK to me there is always a better way to look at things other than that, and I'm tellin you I done had some friends hit me with that situation and when it comes to that I'll turn into somebody's mama lol, no lie. Sorry it took me awhile to actually read this but I came!

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Wasnt one of your better pieces IMO. But I liked the fact that you took a different approach than your normal work. Sorry it took so long for me to reply. Uppin for you

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Well IMO it was hot i was really feeling it

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Old 04-20-2005, 05:25 PM   #12 (permalink)
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dude I love the poem and the way it seems to wind down. Its as if the words take you off the edge and leave you an the ground. dead dead dead. was I ever really living?

I like your twist on the concept that life feeds death and took it a step further.. life feeds death feeds life. Very cool. I have thought about it myself. Like.. energy cannot be created or destroyed right?? Only changed. So if we are energy what is death? Its not the destruction of our essence (whatever that might be). Id like to think we keep going.. shedding the body like you shed your cloths each night before bed.

Glad I hit this one up

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