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Old 04-11-2005, 12:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Allow me to lay my head down on your pillow
All this fucking we've been doing lately has tired me...
Let's make love tonight... love that only we can endure
love making suitable to bear a child
You remember the feeling don't you?

Allow me to run my fingers through your hair... let's make love tonight and leave the fucking for the young and unexperienced
I know I wouldn't want to tell our child that he/she was created at a cheap Super 8 doing you missionary style

My intent is to listen to some Sinatra and toss your pasta
nah... not quite that erotic... but my intent is to listen to Sinatra and try out some kama sutra

With flower pedals spread across the bedsheets... I will make love to you

Rub lotion on your already sexy body... whisper in your ear how beautiful and sexy you are

And believe me I guarantee I will keep up with your infamous multiple orgasms

Let's make love tonight... love that only a god should be able to experience
You remember the feeling dont you?
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Old 04-11-2005, 01:58 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Ok ok, While I loved reading this...This is actually the third time I've opened it up and read it, the other two times I clicked out refusing to respond...lol...but I've settled my differences and decided to come into your thread, and puke. No..Ok, I understand. I loved this, I truly did. But I hated it because I hate that. Maybe I dont remember the feeling.
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Old 04-11-2005, 05:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the feeling and message in this. I like the difference between making love and any other type of sex. It invokes good feelings.

The "toss your pasta" kind of ruined it for a minute ... I had to chuckle at that..sorry hehe

If it were me personally....I would take it and expand on the idea. But it's not me so that's up to you but its a great topic.
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Ok ok, While I loved reading this...This is actually the third time I've opened it up and read it, the other two times I clicked out refusing to respond...lol...but I've settled my differences and decided to come into your thread, and puke. No..Ok, I understand. I loved this, I truly did. But I hated it because I hate that. Maybe I dont remember the feeling.

thanks for your feedback bhitiah... lol

im glad you liked it..

and skandelous lala... preciate yours as well...

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i liked how you emphasised the descriptions as much as others have...gettin tired of readin those ones...this one had some nice emotion in it. and i gotta agree with skandaleous lmao...that toss you pasta line was like whoa...haha shit was kinda funny though...but i feel it also took some of the seriousness out of it....

uhhh...besides that i thought it was a nice piece...keep it up as always bruh.
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This was nie I enjoyed the read. Nothing that I can really going indepth about but it was real nice AF.
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"My intent is to listen to some Sinatra and toss your pasta
nah... not quite that erotic... but my intent is to listen to Sinatra and try out some kama sutra"

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Toss your pasta ?

This poem was pretty cool man. I can see you were having fun with it though. Always good to see something fun in the realm. A lot of people get caught up into making everything so serious. I'm guilty of that myself lol


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Allow me to lay my head down on your pillow
All this fucking we've been doing lately has tired me...
Let's make love tonight... love that only we can endure
love making suitable to bear a child
You remember the feeling don't you?

Allow me to run my fingers through your hair... let's make love tonight






Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


lol u got me there, the rest was funny, but those lines were str8 fiyahhhhhhhhh!
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Allow me to lay my head down on your pillow
All this fucking we've been doing lately has tired me...
Let's make love tonight... love that only we can endure
love making suitable to bear a child
You remember the feeling don't you?

Allow me to run my fingers through your hair... let's make love tonight






Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


lol u got me there, the rest was funny, but those lines were str8 fiyahhhhhhhhh!
yeah i had alot of fun writing this one

thanks for sharing sunny
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this was a sensual piece, I wasnt expecting it to be quite that In ya face, ok ok, thats a bad pun, but yea, It showed a definate split between sex and love making and was passionate
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LOL at Brit...

and the piece well... love it, it was hot.
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thanks brit and samara...

lol at brits comments on the post.. you crazy man
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