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Old 03-30-2005, 12:54 AM   #1 (permalink)
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a lil keystyle i wrote up... hope yall like

the reflection in the mirror is one of disgust and guilt
She called out a warning... implying she needs help

In her free time she likes to write and sing, she sings songs of love and happiness

Something that she never did quite understand completely

Mom and Dad are not much help, when all they do is encourage you to continue on with your fallacies

Always concerned about appearance; even when the lights go out

Eyebrows trimmed religiously... lipstick applied even though she knows she is going to be alone for the night

She goes to sleep with the fascination of yesteryear's celebrities...

And how she continually say that you will become one... someday soon

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Old 03-30-2005, 03:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hey, THis was cool... For a keystyle... Interesting topic you chose... What made you write about this? this was nice though... like always...
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Old 03-30-2005, 05:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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'Always concerned about appearance; even when the lights go out'

ya know i love your work... this was simple thou, nothin wrong with bein simple, but ive seen alot more complex work from you before, either way your writing is nice...

Oh and hey hey hey lol =)

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was feelin this...i got alot out of it...

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In her free time she likes to write and sing, she sings songs of love and happiness

Something that she never did quite understand completely
somethin she dreams about achieving one day...shes one of those that wants to be looked up to because of how she looks...very deep...

liked this key here...very nice, keep doin you.
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thanks for the replies guys

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in her own zone, but at the end of the day she's lonely, waiting for someone right to come along...this was sweet, you can probably turn this into a song...get out the acoustic and I'll sing it! I'ma do that someday with my stuff, that's what I wanna do anyway, but about this piece I'm running out of words here...

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yeah one person called me so far...

and he was very rude on the voicemail... dont even know the guy even on this site..

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"Always concerned about appearance; even when the lights go out"

^That was my favorite line. This was a decent piece, just like the last one you posted. Kind of reminds me of Nas, "black girl lost". I didnt like the way you had it formatted though. Keep it up.


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