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Old 03-28-2005, 07:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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flight of fancy
flew off the mountain top
eyes closed into sky bluewhite streams of sound
greenybrown hills lifting up to vision
& swirling lines of telegraphs 'n cornfields
seen in one long smooth arc
and soaring over cascade-flecked ocean
plunging down into bubbles sparkling
turquoise filaments streaking everywhere
cool & greenbright

racing up
crashing into sunshine
speeding higher 'til blue shades to blackest black
'n the stars flash open 'n wondrous
EVERYWHERE
opening the heart ...

below ...
Earth coolblue 'n browngold
turns silent ...

one fragile blue moth floating on a moonbeam ...
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Old 03-28-2005, 11:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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This was nice but kinda of simple for me... I haven't seen much from you but i got to say it was nice and short... i was somewhat digging it... not bad keep it up....
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Old 03-29-2005, 12:32 AM   #3 (permalink)
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This wasn't really my type of poetry. But, it was well written in a sense that it imposed a lot of imagery. Every line gave me a new feeling as I read along. Nicely done.
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Old 03-29-2005, 11:20 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Imagery was on point in this poem. Brought a feeling of calmness to the reader. I havent seen you around here in a long time. Welcome back.


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Imaginary was crazy wild right

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this was great..it took me in circles..your word usage was very unique and hope to see more of this from you...

the piece was really fast paced and made for a very enjoyable read....

make sure to hit up some of the other poets in the realm...

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Old 04-01-2005, 10:46 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I liked this alot...

'racing up
crashing into sunshine
speeding higher 'til blue shades to blackest black
'n the stars flash open 'n wondrous
EVERYWHERE
opening the heart ... ' - sat with me...

I liked the lenght thoroughly
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At first, to be honest with you, I was like, what in the world, but the words in the piece helped to take me there. I loved the imaginery. It's very creative and unique. A lot of writers try to write pieces that consists mostly on imaginery and never work out, but I think you handled the form well. Good job!
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